|Reviews for Humor Me|
| serenityselena chapter 13 . 9/5/2011
the most hilarious story ever...
I dont know if I ever laughed so much...
congratulations for the story _
| LadySonics chapter 7 . 9/1/2011
I just marathon read through the first 7 chapters of your stories - probably won't hit the rest of your chapters until the weekend.
Anyway, I have to say I normally avoid the parody story types but part of me was laughing through every chapter - Though, some of the humor is becoming too much. The flatulence joke reference everytime Dumbledore says Harry Potter is going a little overboard and the reanimated clothes is becoming way to weird and old...
I did find a few errors early on. I'll name a few below...
Cedric Diggory is only 2 years ahead of Harry; you should have named him a 3rd year instead of a 4th year (His birthday is in October to qualify for the tri-wizard tournament age requirement). Also I found it weird that he would hang out with first years on the train instead of his own friends...
Why are their other Hogwart's heirs? There should be only one heir to a bloodline - meaning the senior eldest person on the main branch would claim the bloodline...
Madam Pomphrey was named Harry's head of house so why is McGonagall always in the meeting with Harry as his representative?
When Ron lost his hair during potions, why was he in the class? Ron is in Gryffindor and the class was for Ravenclaw/Hufflepuffs only...
When Hagrid made the reference on the COMC class with Draco, first years are not allowed in elective classes and Hagrid doesn't become a teacher until Harry's 3rd year after his expulsion was vindicated...
That's just a few points I found off in your story. It's a good story just a little rough for me to read sometimes...for one I love the Weasley Twins (Creative, inventive, well liked), I don't like them being the villains in the story. Other than that will continue to read.. again probably won't get to the rest until the weekend - L Sonics
| ruth hammond chapter 5 . 8/27/2011
as an ex-teacher, I should feel insulted, but there are times I wished for something like that to get the totally useless teachers out...really didn't need the distractions, but...
keep going...I am forwarding this to people who need laughter in their lives.
could do with a little less swearing but...
back to the story
| hatchi cullen-black chapter 13 . 8/23/2011
OH MY GOD I CANT STOP LAUGHING. MY SIDES HURT. love it.
| ElmRune63 chapter 2 . 8/16/2011
'Leslie Neilson came up next and slapped the old man.'
bahahahaha the best part about that is I can totally see that happening.
| Odile O'Malley chapter 2 . 8/14/2011
I must say that this story is bloody brillant! Keep up the good work! :)
| Oliver Hazard-Perry chapter 1 . 8/8/2011
MY GOOD GOD, I AM FUCKING SCREAMING!
THIS IS THE MOST HILARIOUS STORY I'VE EVER READ. MY MOTHER VERY WELL NEAR TOOK MY LAPTOP AWAY FROM ME.
GOOD JOB BRO. AS IN GOOD JOB.
Oh, by the way, this story has given me some inspiration for our parody of Harry Potter. Thanks! ;]
(please make another one.)
LOL ALBUS: "HARRY POTTER!"
Sorry I just had to do that ROFLMAOLOLOLLL
(Goodness gracious, sorry for the illiterate review.)
| weebs chapter 13 . 7/30/2011
This has got to be the most rediculous, crude, and immature thing ive ever read. Having said that, i loved it. One of the funniest and random stories ive read so far. good work
| WPL chapter 5 . 7/29/2011
this is some funny sh...it
| WPL chapter 4 . 7/29/2011
LOL LOL LOL LOL great story
| WPL chapter 2 . 7/29/2011
great sense of humor I Love it
| Cassandra30 chapter 9 . 7/21/2011
| Celexs Draconia chapter 10 . 7/21/2011
This story cause me to lose my breath several times from laughing. I can just picture some of the reactions and they are hilarious. Very funny.
| Cassandra30 chapter 8 . 7/21/2011
| Cassandra30 chapter 7 . 7/21/2011
Love it Love it!