|Reviews for Of Faith And Sin|
| Bandgeek252 chapter 14 . 10/5/2011
Great story! I do find this pairing intriguing and you made it very enjoyable. I thought Riley was a waste of time for her. I like the way you made Buffy into pain. Sounds very perfect for her. I will be reading the sequel quickly. Love it!
| cbrendible chapter 15 . 8/1/2011
Cool beans! A sweet story which I didn't think too much of in the beginning, but it turned out to really surprise me. I hope to enjoy the sequel as well.
| KMacD chapter 14 . 1/29/2011
| mmooch chapter 14 . 12/25/2010
Thank you for the wonderful Christmas prezzie!
| Littleotter73 chapter 14 . 12/25/2010
Aww! Very sweet! And I don't even get to say anything about Garbanzo... uh Gorgolek. ;)
Thank you for finishing this up on Christmas! Such a nice present! Can't wait for the sequel!
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 14 . 12/25/2010
Aww, the ending was cute. Is this really the last chapter? If so, I enjoyed the story a lot and definitely hope for a sequel.
It certainly was fluffier than the other chapters, but a bit of sappiness couldn't have been avoided in this situation... unless you had let Giles die, in which case I might never speak to you again. I would probably duct tape you to Joss Whedon and throw the traitorous bundle of you over Niagara Falls. Or some drama like that. So okay with the fluff. See, you get to live! ;)
Will you tell about the baby in your sequel? In spite of the fact that I would be horrible at writing about a hypothetical BG baby, it can be enjoyable to read stories where they have one. I bet you already have lots of ideas, so get crackin'!
Merry Christmas, by the way!
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 13 . 12/21/2010
Kinda depressing, but I bet Giles is going to wake up soon. I just hope Buffy isn't having Gorgolek's demon baby or something. That would be an upsetting end to this story! :P
Oh, and it was really nice of you to mention me and littleotter in your last chapter! I forgot to mention that in my other review, because I was too focused on the oozing and wriggling. ;)
I'm excited to see how the story ends!
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 12 . 12/21/2010
So much drama at the end of the chapter! I'm too exhausted for such an emotional roller coaster... but I totally enjoyed reading it anyway. :)
I won't comment much more since I see there's already another chapter, too, but there was one thing that caught my eye which I really liked. For some reason, I loved your descriptions of Gorgolek and the Furlon demon at the beginning of the chapter, especially the bit about the Furlon 'oozing and wriggling'. Very... *visual* word choice. I loved it!
Off to read the next chapter...
| Littleotter73 chapter 13 . 12/21/2010
Damn... two months? Come on, Giles! Your woman has a bun in the oven and she needs you! Snap out of it. She needs to take care of herself and your baby.
Such a sad chapter. Can't wait for the conclusion (and eventually the sequel)!
| Littleotter73 chapter 12 . 12/21/2010
First off, thanks for the dedication! Wow, that's just awesome! :)
Second, thanks for the beta or R&R offer, it is much appreciated!
Third, let's get to the review:
On the edge of my seat action... Check!
Great death scene of a great villain (Gargoyle, uh... Gorgolek)... Check!
Plays with my emotions... Check!
Love for the Scoobies... Check!
Please, please, please let us have a happy ending... it's almost Christmas. I don't think I could take character death at Christmas!
Thanks so much for the ride. This really is a great story!
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 11 . 12/17/2010
The star of this chapter was the banter that Buffy and Giles had with the security guard about Giles being her lover, not her father. I definitely got a good snicker out of that one, and it was characteristically clever in terms of distracting him just enough to escape.
Buffy's reaction to the idea of Giles' scandalous youth was also entertaining, and very interesting when you factor in her experience with Ripper. Wondering if you might be doing more with that whole situation...
Of course I can't wait to see Gorgolek again. I feel like him and I are old friends now, although he never sent me a Christmas card. (hides hurt feelings). Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
| Littleotter73 chapter 11 . 12/16/2010
Wow, this was really action packed and had me on my edge of my seat! I kinda figured one of them was going to get shot though. Poor Giles! I was cringing at the whole bullet removal scene. Reminded me of a movie I saw but I can't recollect at the moment. Hopefully as physically drained and in pain as he is, he can still defeat Gargamel. I mean Gorgolek. ;)
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 10 . 12/15/2010
Cool chapter. I actually really liked Xander in this one; once in awhile he really manages to scene-steal in fics. I liked his observation of Buffy and Giles and his sarcastic little joke about having a truck. :)
You've created a lot of suspense with this story, and I'm terribly excited to see how it's going to end up! I'm glad you've made it to ten chapters, because it's really been fun to read.
I just hope Buffy gives Giles some 'I love you' action before the end of the fic. Or before one of them dies. Oh god, you're not going to kill them, are you? (panics) I hope not.
As always, looking forward to the next bit!
| Littleotter73 chapter 10 . 12/14/2010
So as you know, I am fully invested in your story! I didn't want the chapter to end, or better yet, I wanted to immediately move onto the next chapter! And I love how you treated Xander as "the one who sees" and yet still have him wigged by a relationship between Watcher and Slayer. I think at 18, he wouldn't know quite how to process it. Very in character. Bring on chapter 11! :)
| rebelxxwaltz chapter 9 . 12/10/2010
Wow, action packed chapter! Gorgolek sure is mean, but also kinda snarky- which I can appreciate. ;)
Loved the crazy loop you threw into the story with the whole Hope Diamond situation... for some reason it made me think immediately of the 'Great Muppet Caper'. Don't mind me, I'm currently overtired and a bit silly in the head. But Buffy and Giles in black cat burglar outfits? Might bear some consideration...
Ooh, and the little tidbit about Buffy being pregnant did not go unnoticed. Maybe Gorgolek gave her a demonic ultrasound? I bet he was really angry with Giles because he wanted to give him the pair of little blue booties he was hiding behind his back, but Giles wasn't interested. Is this what a demon gets for trying to be nice?
Okay, this review has definitely tumbled off the deep end. I think we'll just let you take care of Gorgolek and I'll go back to my corner (puts on dunce cap). Keep up the good work! :)