Reviews for This Was It
MsSerres4 chapter 24 . 12/27/2010
awesome ending,I guess is from the book?(Breaking Down)

so in general your story was totally awesome,congratulations *applause*
oh-so-private chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
couldnt be more believeable than that it was perfect i could ally see the way jacob felt in this story and it made sense he was angry and his anger finally took him over the edge stephenie meyer could have used ur help with this part of the book cause wen i was reading it i was waiting for her to make jacob angry enough to deestroy some thing i wouldve liked it if he wouldve destroyed anything but he didnt ... i love ur version
MsSerres4 chapter 22 . 12/21/2010
awesome as always
MsSerres4 chapter 21 . 12/20/2010
Love it!
MsSerres4 chapter 20 . 12/17/2010
awesome chapter
MsSerres4 chapter 19 . 12/16/2010
*new reader* your story is totally amazing,keep me updated please
edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 19 . 12/15/2010
interesting story
LoveLace143 chapter 17 . 12/11/2010
LOVE THE STORY PLEASE UPDATE
LoveLace143 chapter 14 . 12/5/2010
PLEASE UPDATE AND I LOVE THIS STORY AND HOW JACOB NEVER IMPRINTED BECAUSE I HATE IT WHEN THE GUY NEVER NOTICED YOU OR WAS TRYING TO KILL YOU IN JACOBS CASE BUT THEN WHEN THEY IMPRINT ON YOU THEN IT ALL CHANGES LIKE WHAT WOULD HAVE HAPPENED IF THEY DIDNT IMPRINT YOU WOULD MOST LIKELY DIE WITHOUT KNOWING YOUR LOVE FOR EACHOTHER LIKE THATS JUST WEIRD AND SICK SO PLEASE UPDATE.
a-brunette-rapunzel chapter 13 . 12/3/2010
Wow, i love your breaking dawn version better. Renesmee ruined the book i think i wish Bella picked Jacob married and had a baby with him, Like any other Team Jacob Fan :P
GeorgeGlass chapter 11 . 11/29/2010
Hmm, interesting. So the Cullens really are on their own against a pack of werewolves hellbent on killing Renesmee and the Volturi doing whatever it is the Volturi do.
wolfie96 chapter 5 . 11/25/2010
briillliant loved it great story 10/10
Mackenzie L chapter 8 . 11/23/2010
Aw, nice job!
PyroXNamedXHaze chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
im guessing your one of the THREE jacob black (foul mutt!) fans? you should ERASE this mutts story! (bloody idiot!)
Doctor Clementine Who chapter 3 . 11/13/2010
yay finally a story with no jxr imprinting
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