|Reviews for The gull's cry|
| Duilin chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Though it was long, I loved it either way! There's something about the repeats that makes it what it is. Though Earwen isn't really mentioned extensively, I think you've portrayed her nicely.
| Venyatuima chapter 1 . 5/11/2003
Wow . . . cool. Long, yes, but it worked for that poem. The structure wasd also rather unusual, but that too worked well. Moving, and kinda haunting. Loved it.
| sketch chapter 1 . 5/3/2002
| Deborah Judge chapter 1 . 3/11/2002
This is really beautiful and unique. Thank you.
| Oboe-Wan chapter 1 . 3/10/2002
(I am in awe of anyone who can write poetry at ALL... but this is really quite impressive)
Finarfin's bride is hardly mentioned in the Silmarillion, and I think the personality you attribute to her is quite appropriate. I love the description of Finrod, but found it a little sad that the other brothers were only mentioned at their deaths, and Galadriel not at all.
Over all... beautiful. The beauty of language at its best.
| Victoria to Worthing chapter 1 . 3/9/2002
Oh, I like this. It's so sad, and beautiful. Does your name mean black cat in French? Sorry , that's random. This is gorgeous, and I like the structure.