|Reviews for Look Who's Talking|
| China-kouran chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
Very nice job! I really enjoyed this I hope you write more :)
| XxX-Lost-In-Translation-XxX chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Its really well written and is amazingly sad and happy at the same time. Love it!
| GabberJabber chapter 1 . 11/28/2010
This is everything I ever wanted out of Karofsky and more, you have his voice down so wonderfully!
This really really needs to become a two-shot, because 1) Your Kurt is amazing, 2) Your Karofsky is amazing and 3) I really really just want some more of this verse.
I so vote for the second option, cause Kurt would be such a good influence on Dave and I kinda wanna watch Karofsky flounder a bit trying to get Kurt to like him :D
| ColouredRose chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
I decide that the ending means he sees reason - and maybe makes those changes for not just himself, but to show Kurt who he really is when the homophobia is subtracted. :) Just my two cents.
| Camunki chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Love it! I'm also a romantic at heart, so I like to think that Kurt magically forgives Karofsky for all the evilness and they fall in love. 'Cause that would totally happen, (then again you never know with Glee...) I'd like to tell you to write a second part to this, but actually it probably works best alone.
| Miss Meggie chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
this was really good
| l'amour-the-poet chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
. If I had to envision a way for karofsky to start coming to terms- I think this would be at the top of my list.
You don't turn him into a suddenly idea boyfriend and you keep Blaine and his importance to Kurt front and center- but you really do touch on those feelings Karofsky has for Kurt too and the pretty messed up way he sees himself.
And Kurt's dialogue? So spot on. and two moments that had me grinning- 1. /"What do you want?" Kurt asked, his voice sharp and acrimonious. But Dave can't help but think it still sounds nice and pleasant. It's almost like getting mauled by a puppy. Sure- it hurts, but it doesn't matter because it's a puppy and puppies can't really hurt you. /
lol mauled by a puppy. He's such a kid, I swear.
Also the Hulk referencetrue love. WOAH. XD
I really really really hope you continue. It would make my life. 3 (However it turns out- love how you are focusing on their individual growth as characters.)
| Choice chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Awesome. I loved this, because Kurt didn't go and forget all the shit Karofsky put him through, but at the same time I'm happy to envision a positive Kurtofsky future. :P
(Also-I LOL'd at your author's note. The dirty cousin, indeed. Still... it needs some lovin', too!)
Thank you for posting this awesome story!
| bookworm51485 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
Personally, despite the bullying (and I was bullied severely in middle school, so I know how it feels), I still lean towards Karofsky. Though he's not my first choice, I would chose pretty much anyone over Blaine. Not only was there next to no chemistry between him and Kurt, but he just felt sleazy and fake to me. Maybe it was bad acting on Darren Criss' part, but I got a really bad used car salesman vibe that turned me off and made me feel like there'd be some odd twist where he would turn out to be the bad guy and like try to force himself on Kurt or something, and Karofsky would have to save the day. Wow that was a long rambly sentence :-) But I think it made sense... Too early in the morning. I need to go to sleep now. If you decide to continue, my vote goes for Kurtofsky because Blaine's a creepy boy.
| Dreaming-Of-A-Nightmare chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
that... was fucking fantastic!
(i know this is a horribly vague adjective, but bear with me; you've left me speechless from the perfectness of this~)
| WeAreTomorrow chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
I agree with all your reasons but whenever someone asks me why I like them I just shrug and say that I'm a sucker for lost causes.
Guess I'm just to lazy.
Anyway love the story and your narrative Dave voice.
| AineRain chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
i want option two please~~
| XxRandomHeartxX chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
I know that there are heaps of people who dislike Karofsky and all for everything that he's done, but I myself can't hate him. I know he's been horrible to Kurt and there is no excuse for that, but I can't help but feel sorry for him. I think he's confused and overwhelmed by all his feelings, and his hatred of himself, that he lashes out the only way he knows how. By pushing poor Kurt around. So, in that respect, I feel really sorry for him. That he feels like he has to resort to violence to hide his insecurities.
But I'm a romantic at heart too, and I believe that people can change, and that Karofsky has that potential. He definitely has a shot for redemption, and I WANT him to be a better person. I don't want him to get married with someone he doesn't love, or put on this facade for the rest of his life. So I'm going out of this story thinking that Karofsky did change in the end.
You did a great job on this. Wonderful writing, and I'm sorry for the long review, but you brought up some interesting points and I couldn't resist :)
| queerteaoop chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
I find it odd that I'm almost rooting for Karofsky more than Blaine... I feel like he can be redeemed somehow, and that Blaine should just be Kurt's friend.
Anyway, nice job, I'm looking forward to more! .
| jekyllhj7 chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
I know what you mean about bullying. I have been on the bad end of that more times than I care to remember.
BUT... as time as passed and I'm out of high school... I've come to realize that bullys are bullys for a reason. Usually a reason they can't even conciously realize for themselves.
Although I hate what Dave did in the past, now knowing the reason behind it, I really feel for him. What he is going through both inside and out, is really heartbreaking. I really hope he gets some kind of resolution.