This story is just beautiful i cant even describe how it made me feel. C:

but i can tell you it did made me cry LOL.

Anyway Ive been reading and reviewing alot of your story's lately and your probably getting annoyed sorry :X but i just love them soooo much your so talented :)

"Another day, another dollar; Another year, another rose."

Thankyou,

that is all I have to say.

Absoloutely beautiful. You nearly had me in tears, but you achieved well in making me feel bad. Really bad. But in a good way, in terms of realisation. Reminding me of the amount of suffering occuring around us. And to think you used characters from South you for sharing:] Though only thing disappointing is that this deserves more response. Good job!

This story was beautiful! And your delivery was perfect! You shouldn't doubt your talent. Have faith in yourself: you are an amazing author! :)

Man. You are one in 6 billion, my friend.

You seem to have this...complete grasp of human suffering about you. And you phrase it so beautifully. Most people would just go "Kenny was hungry. Kyle felt bad." But you've managed to weave it into such delicate phrasings. EVERYTHING was deliberate. There were no misleading lines or anything of the sort.

What's more surprising is that...this is a fanfic of all things. A FANFIC. And this little story has had more impact on more people than so many of the published books that you can find lining the shelves of Barnes and Nobles.

So I'm going to say this: Keep. Writing. Seriously, do not stop. If you do, it will be a HORRENDOUS waste of talents that the world has yet to unfold.

You would DESTROY Stephanie Myers. You could crush J.K. Rowling. Stephen King, Ann Rice, and Poe have nothing on your techniques that I've seen you envelope in your horror stories.

Your style is smooth and so natural. It's like...watching a picture I guess you could say. Watching a movie I guess is closer, haha. My point is, you're an extremely talented girl. You've been given an immense gift for words that most can only dream of...please don't let it go to waste. Share what you can do with the world.

It's been waiting for Mark Twain's reincarnation ;)

Oh, my. This was heartbreaking and beautiful. Thank you~

duude, I've been meaning to read this fanfic for a while. I normally don't read SP fics and I normally don't review but... ohh this is just so heartbreaking. so bittersweet. ;-; I love their angsty friendship dynamic- even after kyle's death!

Loved the story; it was sad, but at the same time, happy. Keep it up :)

i think you just killed my friend D: she's sobbing over next to me and talking about donating to hobos and becoming hippies... so this is just another review telling you how much you made us cry TT~TT. This is her friend and I love/hate you so hard right now you UGH ; ; I feel like a douche canoe.

Beautiful...loved it. Poor Kenny :(

:'( so sad.

3 it was very well done. Don't be hard on yourself.

Oh this is so sad, but so lovely. Great job!

TTTT Those 3 girls in the journal were right, this a sad story. I shoulda read it before. But I couldn't understand the POVs ;A;

This is so sweet, so sad... I started to cry at the end. Kenny buying roses for Kyle, and saying "Please make sure he eats..."

T~T

Breaks my heart. I don't know what I would do if my best friend ever died so suddenly like that, but I admire your Kenny for his perseverance in Kyle's name.

3

This is beautiful!