|Reviews for Not a Typical Civil War|
| Veritas1995 chapter 5 . 12h ago
The Fantastic Four are split. Oh this is getting good.
| Veritas1995 chapter 2 . 14h ago
If Hill hadn't ticked off Captain America, then the Civil War would never have happened.
Speaking of the Civil War- it would be a great plot for Avengers 3.
| Bluecho chapter 15 . 3/6
Your continuity is so much better than the one we got. Can we sue to have official Marvel canon changed to this one?
| NeoTyson chapter 15 . 8/2/2012
| Gijinka Renamon chapter 15 . 6/12/2012
This is 'effin brilliant, you know that? This is WAY better than what actually happened...
I also like how you described what would have happened afterwards... though it makes me sad that this will never happen. *SIGH*
| VM mercenary chapter 15 . 2/1/2012
This fic is awesome, and you sir, are awesome. You're a better writer than most of the hacks writing comcs today. I'll never understand why there are so many good writers and artists doing fanfictions and webcomics while people like Liefeld keep steady jobs in the industry going from book to book.
| Maximilianus chapter 5 . 6/9/2011
I am thoroughly enjoying the story thus far. Aside from a few little things (missing a few commas, the fact that you don't capitalize "man" in "Spider-Man") I think it's very great storytelling.
| Darth Commentator chapter 15 . 4/20/2011
Dang! You are good at this. Your author's notes on writing were also intriguing. There was a lot of wisdom to be found there.
| Finmonster chapter 15 . 2/28/2011
Hey, great job with this story! Sorry it took me so long to get you another review. The ending was very nice and i liked how everyone managed to work things out. I also like how you took the time to figure out how other storylines would change as a result of your changes. Some of those stories sound especially interesting. Keep up the good work! I'm going to go read some of your other stories now. Later!
| Spaceman chapter 15 . 12/24/2010
Great Fic. Showing People How the Comic Book Should Have Been Made. You should be one of Marvel's Writers and some of there writers should be fired. Hope you write more comic stories.
| Wolvmbm chapter 15 . 12/17/2010
Interesting answers to some the questions that linger within your original tale.
Nice of you to clear up the Punisher appearance, but even I wonder whom was Frank's man on the outside when he and the heroes was trapped within the Negative zone ?
Nice alternative way of producing World War Hulk, by making Dr. Doom being the reason of his return. Also I must say I find it a bit hard to believe that the New Warriors were able to stop him without any assistance from the other heroes of the Marvel U. :D
I was very interested on Dr. Doom's fate within all of this, very interesting indeed.
Also great switch using the Hobgoblin instead of the Green Goblin to control S.H.I.E.L.D in the end. :D
Please do keep up such great work upon future ideas and hope that they turn out to be great stories like this one. :D
| Wolvmbm chapter 14 . 12/17/2010
Great way of ending this story. I must say I did expect Doom to go after The Thing first due to his hatred of the rock hard Superhero. I guess having rock body does bring in some good points as well as some bad ones.
Also great to see the Fantastic Four back together again, along with the Young Avengers. It was also interesting to know that the Young Avengers are leaving New York for a while.
I got to say the compromise between Logan, Steve and Tony was interesting and adds another Team for Logan to be a part of. :D
This has truly been a great treat to read and a great alternative way of showing how an event like Civil War can be altered and done correctly if given the proper information. :D
Please do keep up such good work upon such great ideas like this one as I can't wait to see what you come up with next. ;D
| Wolvmbm chapter 13 . 12/17/2010
Well, I must say I didn't expect for you to redeem Speedball the way you did for this story, well done indeed. :D
Very Clever how Speedball was able to beat Dr. Doom and the Sentry. :D
However what of the mind-control Thunderbolts, are they still out there willing to finish up Dr. Doom's orders or not?
And is the War between the heroes truly over ? :(
Please do keep up the good work upon such a great storyline like this one. :D
P.S., one thing that bugged me is what ever happen to the Hulk and his exile was it a part of Dr. Doom's plans as well ? :(
| Finmonster chapter 12 . 12/15/2010
Hey awesome chapter! Liked the fight between T.C.11 and the Sentry. I especially like this new version of the New Warriors, cant wait to see what they can do. Also, Punisher showing up to help She-Hulk and Spider-Man, though i question if Spider-Man is on his last legs, why is Punisher running on full power. Did Doom not gas the cells? Also, i have to ask, is the epic scene you're describing the climax of the Disney version of Atlantis? Because it sounds very similar. Keep up the good work!
| DBZ Stargate Ninjawars chapter 12 . 12/13/2010
"Fast as the lightning he wields… man I love this body."
With that one statement, all those Iron man slash fanfics suddenly make sense. :p