Reviews for Not a Typical Civil War
edboy4926 chapter 15 . 5/9
Good story
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 13 . 3/23
Would have liked the magical stingers, but that would have taken its own amount of time to explain/justify for those not aware of Spider-man's whole totem background
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 12 . 3/23
Like the Crazy Prepared versus Paranoid comment by Sentry
LOL for how Mr. Fantastic used, and Punisher is having a great time
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 11 . 3/23
"No. It's you or my family. Now run away as fast as you can." Awesome
Smart idea for anti-Sentry tech
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 10 . 3/23
Little bit of a hint back there where you said you thought Doom was one of the few people to beat Captain America in strategic thinking. Also explains Hill's incompetence, with her actually being both good at her job and a good actor
Was thinking of rebuking Doom for Monologuing about his plan, for the exact same reasons Iron Man gave, and then he mentioned the gas... :-)
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 3/23
That was indeed good logic for the Pym particles. Simpler storyline for Yellowjacket working for Doom, over a vast alien conspiracy that was never really thought out too well
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 3/23
Love the work with Spider-Man, not just his own brilliance (and inside knowledge), but yes his spidy-sense would make up for Punisher any day of the week; you have totally won the right to comment on it
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 3/23
Do like what you are doing with Wolverine here, the veteran warrior who specializes and going quiet, and knows everyone. Also a lot easier on Namor, sending a surface dwelling killer to take care of the problem without resorting to his own covert resources
Also, a much smarter and faster defection for Spider-Man. Breaking out on your own is harder than contacting your friends
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 3/23
Overlooked part from Civil War on how yes, Susan Storm let the rebels get away
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 3/23
Enjoyed the Namor part the best, though the X-men section was well thought out too
Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 3/23
The Hill addition was indeed well done and necessary
Jamags chapter 14 . 7/29/2014
Hmm... The denouement was a little abrupt, but all in all, it's good. I really enjoyed this story, which is saying something, because I'm less than a fan of the original. I really enjoyed your lessons, and as I myself enjoy studying storytelling, I found it refreshing to see the narrative structure of Civil War broken down and improved. Excellent work.
Jamags chapter 13 . 7/29/2014
Seriously enjoying this. Can't wait to see how it ends.
Jamags chapter 12 . 7/29/2014
I only have two words that can sufficiently commentate on this chapter:

Epic indeed.
Jamags chapter 11 . 7/29/2014
*Slow clap again*
Well played again. Not quite as cool as the Doom twist, but still awesome.
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