Reviews for Welcome Home
Noah of Literature chapter 4 . 11/14/2012
i like the 'The King is happy, and the Lady Sarah had made him happy.' part! It's so cute! X3
Myra the Dovahkiin chapter 4 . 8/20/2011
great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting.
Helena Alexandra chapter 4 . 2/3/2011
dutifully reviewing, as requested of all readers.

hehehe very cute. hmmm. i couldn't find the song quote, may i have a hint?
delete-the-girl chapter 4 . 1/26/2011
ROFL I loved this just as much as I loved the other ones before it. You were spot on with Viper, and I couldn't help but laugh and love. Good job, very well written. Can't wait to read more and see more of Viper who we love so much.

;) Cadence
Chibikitty9788 chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
please update soon
notwritten chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
It was very nice. Keep smiling. :-)
Pureblood Viper chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
VIPER! This is the character I've been waiting for! I am the VIPER! Oh and the song would be ... in the owl I send to you. Can't give it away on here now can I? Mwahahaha. Very well written, Bee, and I hope to see more of Viper soon.

Love,

Ciar
HelloMissDeath chapter 3 . 12/12/2010
hehe i like this!
BuffyMyraRae chapter 3 . 12/5/2010
fantastic! Please continue!
Anenihan chapter 3 . 12/5/2010
Yoooooghurt.. I was thinking of yogurt... nice save LOL.

Very nice beginning. Please do continue. meow
delete-the-girl chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
As always, LOVED IT!

The glitter boy and yoooghurt were my favorite parts of course.

I'm falling more and more in love with Lanie. I love how Jareth describes her.

"She seems very uh, cheerful" Sarah said,

"That's one word to describe her. Another would be annoying" Jareth commented

and how she disappeared in a cloud of glitter, also loved.

Ugh I just loved everything about this chapter okay. LOL

Can't wait till the next update. I look forward to seeing more of Lanie and the next of us to appear. ;) Love you and love your story.
LittleMargarita chapter 3 . 12/3/2010
ha ha ha ha ha! Nice save!...I bet Jareth doesn't even know what yogurt is though, and since he was not paying attention to that, he didn't question it...and by the things Sarah heard, she's not leaving. She's there to stay...Nice writing. Very interesting. Love the character Lanie. So far so good, keep up the good work.
notwritten chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
Likeable reading. Keep smiling. :-)
writertron chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
yooooooooghurt? really sarah? was that your best cover? :D

brilliant! this chapter made me chuckle. more?
Chibikitty9788 chapter 3 . 12/2/2010
please update soon
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