Reviews for Draco's Redemption
raymond21 chapter 25 . 10/30/2020
Oowwwh,such a revelation to Harry. To see Lily and severus once a best friend and broken up because sev own mistake,that he really messed up. And finally Harry realize that his father not as awesome as he thought. He is good man,but he has flaw,just like sev. Finally harry see sev as objectively as he thought
raymond21 chapter 23 . 10/30/2020
Oooh, finally Harry didn't living in the dursley anymore. He Will live in ancestor home and guarded by Lupin. And interaction between Hermione and goyle and Crabbe is good too. I really love how you make severus even thought he didn't love Harry, he is not cruel to him. He actually ask Dumbledore to rescue Harry from abused home and make Harry living more happily in summer. Just like in Canon after OOTP,when severus told Dumbledore how Harry is being abused by his aunt and uncle,so Dumbledore took a visit in HBP.
raymond21 chapter 19 . 10/30/2020
Hahahaha, the jokes is so funny,and after see your chapter and progress,i can see why draco didn't want to meet Astoria anymore. Their relationship is sweet,but in the end it was sad. Because Astoria decide to abort his baby and leave draco alone with his only son. When his parents is still bigoted. I can see why draco didn't want to end up with Astoria anymore. To draco,fighting for living is better than give up
raymond21 chapter 16 . 10/29/2020
Wow, a kiss from you beat,you the lucky ones,XD
And Harry really likeable here. He let draco Wins because he didn't want to see draco punished because of him. Because draco his friend. Harry know what it means to be punished for the crime he didn't commit. A Truly selfless soul,Harry. Really,just like his mother,unlike james
raymond21 chapter 13 . 10/29/2020
I like Harry in this actually don't afraid to speak his mind to defend hermione. He anggry at Ron for his insult towards her and make Ron realizing it and ashamed of himself. And in the end,Ron promise to fix his mistake and make amend of it. That's why golden trio is better than marauders. They are not afraid to speak to each other about their mistake and don't afraid to lose their friendship. The marauders in the other hand have Lupin who is just emotionally coward and pettigrew who just worship their hanger on
raymond21 chapter 12 . 10/29/2020
Draco and his friend really likeable here. Unlike in his previous life, draco treat Crabbe and goyle like best friend and in return,they have loyalty to Malfoy unlike in Canon. Hell,even Crabbe is okay he get a scar from his dad because he following draco request. They become true friend.
And draco and Hermione is having nice conversation and good relationship.i didnt know why fans tell me that dramione is toxic when it is not. Unlike in Canon,in the world of FF,draco treats Hermione nicely and defend her whatever she is in peril. Not like in Canon. The toxic relationship is actually Jily even in FF. Many ff make James obssesed with Lily and hexing anyone who have crush on her. And somehow,Lily ended up with him,when he is just deflating his head "a bit",not entirely ️
Afrancum1 chapter 1 . 10/25/2020
I just discovered this story I am amazed you have been writing it for 10 years! thank u!
Guest chapter 52 . 10/22/2020
I like this, however there is constant spelling mistakes that take you out of the scene. I suggest re-reading it or even using a app like grammarly.
lilsammywinchester chapter 61 . 10/19/2020
Fun read! Hope you continue to work on it :)
Charles chapter 22 . 10/16/2020
It's a really good fic so far. You are a great writer; Keep it up!
Guest chapter 62 . 10/15/2020
Amazing!
Guest chapter 62 . 10/12/2020
This story is bloody fantastic!
bkerrmom1 chapter 62 . 10/12/2020
Wow, I started from the beginning of this excellent story ! I am stuck in bed with covid19 my whole family has it. Thank you for sharing and entertaining me while sick. I am looking forward to seeing what comes next !
Guest chapter 62 . 10/11/2020
Thank you for updating, I love your story
Yeahimextra12.0 chapter 41 . 10/10/2020
I haven’t finished reading your story but I did see it wasn’t finished a little while ago and I was worried that it was abandoned so I didn’t think I should read it I started obviously and I was so sad because it’s so good and I love everything I’ve read so far, but I was SOOO happy when I saw you’re still updating and I cannot wait to see where the story goes
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