Reviews for Draco's Redemption
griffinhawk chapter 15 . 3/30/2011
I 've just read your story up to date and ... WOW! I have to say that your idea of a time travel story is a first! I have not seen one for Draco...EVER. There are plenty for Harry or Hermione, but never a Draco/ Redemption story. VERY ORIGINAL! I LIKE HOW YOU'VE HANDLED RON'S CHARACTER WITHOUT BASHING HIM. A lot of D/Hr ship stories tend to do that, you've kept Ron the immature brat that he started out as. Your explanations of the characters feelings and how they drive them are spot on, simply the best I've ever read. I'm subscribing to your story and listing as a new favorite! I look forward to reading chapter 16 soon. OH ya...and special thanks and praise for your beta as well!
RikuTina1990 chapter 15 . 3/29/2011
This is really good nice work
lilyflower42 chapter 15 . 3/29/2011
This was a very good chapter. I like how you are developing the friendship between Narcissa and Severus. Draco and Hermione's reactions to Lockhart were perfect. I hope you update soon!
letthesongtakeflight chapter 15 . 3/29/2011
Please write more of this story! I read the whole thing in two days, its really good! It's this whole different take on things, I don't think I've read anything similar before. Love it :]
Neth chapter 15 . 3/28/2011
Just found this, and I think it's great! It's good to see someone different go back in time and the way you've handled it seems realistic but also fun.

Looking forward to how the trio develop over the years in this 'verse, if Hermione ends up with Draco and how Harry grows up. And hell, Draco's future too.

Looking forward to more.
Mistress Leigh chapter 15 . 3/28/2011
Started this story this morning, and read all fifteen chapters! I love that this story is different from the other Draco/Hermione stories that I have read, and I can't wait for the next chapter. :o)
NorthernLights25 chapter 15 . 3/28/2011
I loved this chapter! I cannot wait for the next one!
Hotaru Vie Jaegerjaquez chapter 15 . 3/28/2011
Wehehehehehe... I grew a Suspicion between Severus and Narcissa...

oh please update soon... I curious about the game...
azndrumergrl chapter 4 . 3/28/2011
Lol Goyle offering to bring Hermione a bottle of cider. Just in awe at how friendly they all are with eachother.

• " Well until he grows up, I will not be spending my hard-earned money to buy a gift for a boy that insults my perfect daughter..."

Lol. This was really cute.

I really liked the scene between Narcissa and Snape. I wonder if he'll ever figure out Draco is reliving his life over again. I'm sure Snape would've loved to had the second chance as well.

azndrumergrl chapter 3 . 3/28/2011
Ha, I was wondering how you were going to tackle Harry being a seeker since he never went after the remembrall (sp?) also, I love how protective Hermione is over Draco.

And I really liked the scene between Snape and Draco. It was just really heartwarming how touched Snape was when he saw Draco using the pocketwatch.
azndrumergrl chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
Oh I love the interaction between Draco and Hermione! How cute that he helped her find Trevor and taught her the Accio spell :)

Love how the sorting hat knew Draco was reliving this part of his life over again.

• "...You-Ron Weasley-are a bigot!"

LOL. What a fierce 11 year old, to be defending someone and speaking their mind like that haha.

I really liked this chapter :)
azndrumergrl chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Wow. So this is the first time I'm reading a time travel story like this. I am really liking it so far :) The concept is so interesting. I can't wait to see how differently this Draco will act.

• "He had eventually realized that Severus had given the watch to him because… he saw the boy as his own son."

I really liked this line. And I love that he treats Dobby better now.
gacr36 chapter 15 . 3/27/2011
I believe this is a really good story, I have enjoyed it a lot. Your way of moving the plot and the changes in the original one are well thought and logical (although you forgot to mention Norbert back at first year). This is by far one of the few good HP fanfictions here in my opinion. Keep it going, comrade.
JarethxXxSarah chapter 2 . 3/27/2011
Wow! I adore your story! You stayed so true to the characters! Especially to Draco! It is so hard to write a story like this one without changing characters personalities, motives, objectives, ect. But you have done so well at crafting the characters that it seems seamless! Great work! I can't wait to read more :D
wandamarie chapter 15 . 3/27/2011
keep up the great work thanks loving it
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