|Reviews for Unstoppable Force|
| babyblue3752 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
| The Reading Elf chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
That was so beautiful! I loved it- amazing job
| Kirsten chapter 1 . 8/7/2013
This was another excellent piece of writing. Thank you for sharing it!
| sami1010220 chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
Aw, great job!
| Autumnights chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
Beautifully written. It took me awhile to figure out it was Bones' perspective, but other than that I have no complaints. It was wonderful.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
| numom1 chapter 1 . 4/1/2013
Excellent story! I enjoyed all the suspense and the first person point of view from McCoy. Bringing the Kobayashi Maru into it added alot of dimension. I love stories where Kirk is willing to sacrifice himself for the ship, but in this one he didn't have to, which makes it even better. The heightened suspense of not being able to tell McCoy what was really going on definitely made the story. I love how Jim had programmed a code into the transporter so he and McCoy could be together if they ever needed to be at the end. Great story!
| thesunwillshineclear chapter 1 . 3/31/2013
I adore the way you set up this fic and everything was wonderfully written and I almost cried. So you did a fantastic job with this piece of work and I loved it!
| royalpinkdogs chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
I had read this a few weeks ago when suddenly, last night, as I slept, this story was woven into my dreams.
First thing-before my Morning Ritual Diet Coke- I had to find it.
Do you know how many Kirk/McCoy stories there are that are felgercarb? junk? ridiculous?
But eventually I found this-thank you for such a marvelous story. You are indeed a masterful enchanter.
| thebondgirl chapter 1 . 1/28/2013
Brilliantly put together, between the narrative and the intervening portions of Kirk's initial speech to his crew. You really had me worried for a minute there that you were going to kill off our beloved Captain - it took a lot of self control to keep from zipping back to the top before finishing reading, to check whether or not this was categorized as "Tragedy", or if you'd put a character death warning I'd somehow missed :P
A great read - well done!
| maplewind chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Loved it! I really loved the fact that you had Kirk's little speech in between each segment. And this whole scenario thing makes me think of the trailer for the second movie with the whole family aspect and now I'm even more excited lol. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
| bowlfullofcherries chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Wow! Amazingly great. Thanks for the read.
| May Eve chapter 1 . 9/25/2012
| Hse Hissie chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
This story was absolutely AMAZING. I loved how you interspersed Kirk's opening crew announcement with the rest of the story in a way that they both gave added meaning to the other. Phenomenal work!
| Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Incredible. The way you wove in the words from the speech and the action, and had me on the edge of my seat from beginning to end...I was right there with Bones, worried, distraught, then so elated when Jim returned. What a masterful way to put this story together! Every detailed make it even more perfect.
Superb writing! :)