|Reviews for Seven Times Over|
| Oriana8 chapter 7 . 3/15
I know these are all one-shots, and I know you wrote them back in the good ol' days of 2010, but if I had to pick just one for you to turn into a full story, it would have to be five. Yup, five. I've always wondered what the child of Tony Stark would be like. (I'm so glad the paladium poisoning was only the stuff of story two. Although, while I'm thinking about it, Patience was the shot that I liked the least. It just seemed so not Pepper. And the ending was so sad. I know, I found it even sadder than either one of them dying. I guess that's just my mentality when it comes to fidelity.)
| jen-loves-jeeps chapter 7 . 2/16
Okay, this story stole my breath. I mean, your way of dropping me into this strange alternate universe, no prompting, and then leaving me with an amazing thought provoking ending for each and every chapter... I don't have words. I think you broke me.
Any chance you will write a full story planned for each of these one shots? I know they would be fantastic!
| Reikajen chapter 7 . 2/13/2013
My god! This last chapter make up a little the 6 others ones lol! You made me have 6 broken heart before the last one lol! Good story even a lot was so sad (and maybe so true, which is sadder! :'( )
| McMuffin chapter 7 . 1/29/2013
These were all so effing depressing, damn. But still good. :) Except now I need to go drown myself in a bucket of fluff.
| Trinilynn chapter 2 . 8/21/2012
Wow that was...thought provoking. Sterility I did not that coming...
| ilikegoo chapter 7 . 8/14/2012
Brilliant and cruel, keeping it angsty (sort of) to the last chapter. But ultimately a brilliant story
| Miss Starfire chapter 7 . 6/10/2012
Thanks for causing SIX heart attacks before getting to the last chapter; I will send you the hospital bill :D
Love them all; thank you for writing them. One thing, though: When you are referring to the bots, you said "Dummy and You"; did you mean "Dummy and Butterfingers"? Or "you" as in us the readers that are holding our breaths reading it? (Because I was; it was very good!).
| rachbigbro chapter 7 . 5/9/2012
This was fantastic, I loved all the different ways it could have gone, but I am glad that you ended with the last one. Wonderful.
| Aynessa chapter 7 . 4/17/2012
Okay. Entire 6 previous chapters were worth all the suffering and angst - JUST for this beautiful chapter right here. Lovely.
| Aynessa chapter 5 . 4/17/2012
Oh thank goodness, it's not angst. I swear I read this whole chapter with terror on my face, lol.
Love this, I really do. I especially love how there's a subtle hope for the future family hidden in the end.
| Aynessa chapter 4 . 4/17/2012
You need to re-categorize this to ANGST. Right now.
*slinks off to cry in a corner somewhere*
| DeathByMonkees chapter 7 . 6/15/2011
ok the last one was perfect iiiii! so excited now! XD all of the chapters were beautifully written, well done :)
| DeathByMonkees chapter 4 . 6/15/2011
lol do you have to kill them every time? XD it was going so well, you were almost there, and then tony was dead. damn it! :P i liked the thing about his skin tasting like coconut though i had to think for a second and then i was like "yeeeeeah, clever!"
| DeathByMonkees chapter 3 . 6/15/2011
these are so sad :'( give me a happy ending damn it! well written, but sad :(
| sunshine-minx chapter 7 . 2/24/2011
This was awesome. There were moments when I gasped (I'm sure you know what moments I mean) and almost turned away...and then I kept going, and was impressed. I LOVED this.