Reviews for Stargate Reopened |
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![]() ![]() Such a good story to bad it ended |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story, please update! |
![]() ![]() Every gonna get more |
![]() ![]() Love to see this story updated and completed. |
![]() ![]() oh good tealc is still alive, I was genuinely worried about that for a hot minute there. 3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() given how slow you are writing and how much you are milking this for a word count i wonder what your schedule is, finishing in a hundred years? this is not an exaggeration, they havent even made contact with the goauld yet. in short the story has barely started and from the looks of things you're going through the episodes meaning we are at epi 5 season 1, or somethjng. you add so many characters that have a mere periphiral inpact on the story and even worse they barely talk about anything relevanf. ive skimmed passed a lot. your writing is quite good with some solid ideas but damn do you need to fix your priorities and stay on point |
![]() ![]() ![]() the construction capabilities of the tollan are vastly understated and utilized. their construction tech alone would be faster than moving old trains and retrofitting them. if you can synthesize food from matter and energy than you have a massive 3d printer |
![]() ![]() ![]() you are here explaining the dimensions of the evac train for the tollan. it js an good example of giving far too much information that simply isnt relevant. keep it simple. a train system in a central place allowing for X amount of transport. done! imo you are adding to the word count for no real reason |
![]() ![]() ![]() i dont get why they are starting off world travel, they have their hands full just understanding the gilders so why go out and get more? not to mention the goauld know nothing of them right now which will change. it makes no sense |
![]() ![]() Curious so did Hammond meet them in 1969 then be nice to continue |
![]() ![]() Great story, please update it as soon as you can. Love to see it completed. Have a great week. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Rad! |
![]() ![]() So good but so sad it ended |
![]() ![]() ![]() A great story and read so far, hope to see much more |
![]() ![]() This is a fantastic story - thank you so much for all of your careful thought and exhaustive planning and hard work on it! :) *hugs* ...now I'm really curious to see what happens with Nem... and how you handle the Tok'ra? Could be a lot of fun! ;) |