|Reviews for Why she's here|
| Alice.the.mad.hatter.15 chapter 1 . 3/5
Are you going to update this book
| Alice.the.mad.hatter.15 chapter 1 . 1/9
| Harry Albus Potter Dumbledore chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
Awesome one-shot. I love it! It was perfect and I believe everyone was in character. Great job!
| Shadowhunterlover 00 chapter 1 . 8/1/2015
| dazzleme787 chapter 1 . 8/15/2013
you should do more for this, i would like to hear your thoughts on how this would play out
| crotia chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
I really wanted to know that to. thank you for given this great story to people like me.
| Istealurfrenchfries chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
| PotterGal14 chapter 1 . 11/30/2012
I really like it and honestly, I'd be happy if you continued it to the rest of the families reactions but it's awesome the way it is. :)
| Obscured Angel chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
I quite enjoyed reading this.
Thank you for writing and posting.
| RedHann chapter 1 . 9/17/2011
Oh. Em. Gee. Please, please, please write more! That was amazing! I absolutely loved this story!
| E. A. S. 2013 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
I really liked this story, especially because the story flowed, and it sounded like an actual scene from the book. I liked your description of how Bella 'glides' through the kitchen. There wasn't much emphasis on that in the book/movie, and I appreciate it in here.
You portrayed the characters beautifully, and I really look forward to reading more of your stories! :)
| caz23 chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Brilliant, I think that was the one thing missing in the films and books the relationship between Carlise & Esme with Bella.
| Neea chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
I've actually Looked for a story like this and I found it now,
but plz continue! The cullens can like ask everything
from qyestions about her friends to what couler her
room home in phonix had, okey maybe not the last
one but I think u get what I mean.. ;)
oh! I forgot, great story! )
| FelicityT chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
If you are desperate I can Beta. Please don't judge me on anything other than my 1-shots though. I can't write a long story as I don't have the dedication or the ability. I read stories as facts & atmosphere quickly for fun. I slow down when I beta so I can catch the mistakes but I can not write without it seeming like a biography. My previous work was grammar editing for Direwolfy on Charlie reads New Moon.
In a nutshell. I can't write more than a 1-shot but I read ALOT (60,000 words a day average since 1/1/10).
But my strengths are correcting mistakes and giving ideas. And my dad is going to Chicago in 2 weeks for a business trip so I can give info on Chicago.
| emily-0192010 chapter 1 . 11/13/2010
Love it! Can you please take down the "complete" and add in a few more chapters? I love stories like this and there really are so few out there.