Reviews for Listening
mysinger chapter 1 . 3/29
Great story! I wondered the same thing in canon, if Remus was awake for at least part of the trip, especially when Malfoy was causing trouble. I liked his POV of the chapter and his memories of Harry as a toddler.
Mathiilde3 chapter 1 . 8/19/2017
This was really interesting, and well written, I enjoyed it a lot! All of Remus' feelings for Harry were so parental and good and it makes me a little sad we did not get it in the book. I am currently really wishing when I check out your other works you will have the entire third book retold from Remus' point of view, or something along those lines. This was just really great, and I liked it a lot!

Mathilde
Charlie chapter 1 . 7/23/2017
This was absolutely wonderful! The pacing was superb and the way you wrote it had me completely engaged. It was so vivid - I could picture the scenes so clearly before me! The characterization was spot on and I especially enjoyed how you portrayed Lupin (mind you, he's my favourite character, and I have pretty high standards regarding how he is written). I just loved how you included the way his mouth twitched slightly, how realistic and "canonical" it felt (almost as if it was taken out of the book, though this might have something to do with the fact the dialogue ((understandably)) didn't diverge much from the original). The only feedback I have is that there were some very minor, occasional spelling mistakes in the text. Y'know, like missing the last letter in the word "Azkaban" or reversing the word "on" but that's what happens when typing and it didn't distract me at all from the story, so don't worry too much about it. The only consistent,"conscious" (I don't know if that word choice makes sense, to be honest) spelling mistake I spotted whilst reading was how you wrote, "followed" as "followed". Overall, though, the story was great. I don't know if you're reading this (considering that this piece was published nearly seven years ago ((I have to admit that I already had like 90% of this review typed up when I saw the publication date))) but if you are, I just want to say that you're a great writer and that no matter how cringy it may be to look back at an old story (though I don't know if this rings true for you - it does for me anyway) you should be proud of this one.
Charlie Hayden chapter 1 . 5/18/2017
I'd love to see this continued on in certain scenes from POA between Lupin and Harry from Lupin's perspective.
Annie Nonymous chapter 1 . 8/7/2016
This was amazing
Ginevra Annabeth Herondale chapter 1 . 7/23/2016
Loved it :)
unofficial potterhead chapter 1 . 3/21/2016
I love it. The memories of lupin when the dementor comes are heart touching. I just wish he wasn't the one who suffered so badly...
JuttaV chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
This was a very interesting point of view, I really enjoyed reading this! :-)
Donni chapter 1 . 2/2/2016
(all I have for you is quiet crying-oh poor Remus, poor Harry)
DarkPhoenix chapter 1 . 8/30/2015
Loved that! It was great! Liked your turn on why the Sneakoscope went off...

Oh, I was reading your profile... Draco in Leather Pants? What is the world coming to?
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2015
Lupin is adorable :) my heart breaks when I think about how this is the first way he met Harry, when he should have been there his whole life!
MagicWriterK chapter 1 . 5/19/2015
Crying...and laughing...why, Rowling, why...
Iris Stardust chapter 1 . 3/11/2015
This was funny (at some parts) and interesting to read.
Polkadot4946 chapter 1 . 8/28/2014
This was a beautiful story. I've always wanted to know Lupins take on the events, and agree that he would've been eavesdropping. You're a brilliant writer!
Lily13 chapter 1 . 8/14/2014
AWESOME!
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