Wow...you write so well! I've never seen a story like this and you did a beautiful job. It was a great idea and now, when i read PoA, this is how I'll see the chapter in Lupin's POV. Nice job )

I really enjoyed this story. Reading how the dementor affected remus was really sad.

wow...just wow. that was so well writen.

personally i have no complaints and a sujestion. Make one so that when Hermione is petrified in second year she is actually concius. but not moving. you could do a searies of chapters of when the boys come to visit her and her thoughts.

Tristen

Your story was amazing! I love how you used Lupi's point of view. It was very interesting

Ohh, I can't believe you don't have any reviews. Anyway, this is a great one-shot! It's definitely unique and well written, almost exactly like Rowling. I don't think I've ever read nor even seen a HP story in the point of view of an actual scene like this. It's interesting to see what might have happened (or at least, this is how I'll see it now). Great job! It was a really fun read. :)

~Skylaar Wolf