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This chapter should've been named "Mushy fluff desu~"

What the hell do you mean "sullied by lemons"?! You can't sully anything with lemons, it's an optional but well appreciated part!

Too bad for Cissy. I don't like you picking a cartoonish villain route for her. We already have Bella out of three Black sisters for that.

You keep mentioning cleaning rituals, but I haven't seen a mention of why they're needed.

This is why I don't read actively ongoing fanfics. Cliffhanger like this would be devastating if the next update would drop in like a month.

Pyrrhic victory. They can't afford to lose veterans and unspeaksies to cannon fodder.

Damn. Seriously, this fic should have some kind of an award because it manages to portray the Weasel in a good light. I'm almost not opposed to Ron/Hr pairing here. Almost.

Greengrass is a stupid cow. She admits she expects to die, she should've asked for help to kill Malfoy and be prepared to take the blame. What are they gonna do to her for killing Malfoy? Chuck her into (destroyed) Azkaban? Put her under cruciatus (again)? Kill her (like Malfoy plans)?

The first thing they should've done when Snape told them he would take them to the Headmaster and then turned their back on them was a Killing curse in his back. Then blame it on DEs. But nooo, plot armour strikes again, we can't have a named bad guy dying that easily without a speech.

Bruh. What a gryffindor. He traded house points (!) for leaked intel on his abilities and training in front of death eater and junior death eaters. He should've just dodged everything and put Gryffindor into negative thousand of house point. Then the entire gryffindor house, including all years, would write to their parents in outrage, it would go into newspapers ("death eater on staff detracted a thousand house point from the boy who lived because he dodged dark magic in his class") and Bones would have the rope to hang Snape on.
At the very least, he has a perfect opportunity to reflect that lethal curse back into Malfoy, killing him. I don't imagine anyone would blame him for 'killing' his attack with a shield charm. And it would surely get Snape sacked too.

Instead, this. Such opportunities wasted, traded for nothing. Instead of using things to hide advantage, he tries to do everything everywhere all alone (or at least with Ginny, Luna).

Uhh, maybe not exactly the right moment to break him bad news.

Nice work with translations, actually fit instead of previous attempt.

Uhh, KGB was reformed into FSB (Federalnaya sluzhba bezopasnosti, Federal security service) by that time though, not whatever SVR. And directorate M actually does exist in it, but its massive and it's responsible for counter intelligence.

Letting Skitter go out was pretty sloppy of him, what if instead of writing things down in the dark of the forest, she would apparate back to newspaper building? I'd rather expect "man in black" visiting her when one of their plants sends them a copy of an article before publication.

Damn. That's... actually a good portrayal of Ron. Who knew it was possible. Truly, fanfiction deviates from canon greatly.