Reviews for Chocolate Kisses and Robinhood's Barn
Twink423 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
Oh em gee! So sweet and cute. And I always love an AwkWard and he is adorable, panic attacks and all. :D
Pink Sphinx chapter 1 . 12/19/2010
This was such a cute little fic. I really enojed it. I loved how you wrote the relationship blooming between Bella & Edward it was very real and extremely sweet.

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twirob chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
that was a beatifl story thanks for sharing this with us
Squeakycat chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
This is fun...I'm excited for more to come!

IllicitWriter chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
GAH! These two were stinking fahreaking caaa-uuute! Loved the first chapter. Awesome writing! You captured 2 innocent lovers, on a journey to forever, perfectly :)
isle.esme92 chapter 1 . 12/15/2010
realy sweet. I love road trips. we once drove from Washington dc to arcadia national park in maine, we were on the road for 4 week, but stopecd for one week in NY. It was great:)
Acinadisme chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
So far, this is the cutest story I've read in the contest. I love young, somewhat dorky Edwards. I though you captured their first time perfectly. Thanks for the great story. Good luck.
TexasTwilight77 chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
Great job, I really liked this one. ;)
djsmommie chapter 1 . 12/14/2010
awwwwwwwwwwwww when it is the right person it is just right - no matter how soon you get there
mselyn28 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
That was incredibly sweet! I literaly got a toothache from all of the confections Bella consumed Edward included! But seriously, I loved the journey you took me on in this story it was complete in short order, and I enjoyed the realistic clumsiness of their first time together. Awesome!
marigold123 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
I grew up in Ohio and never heard that saying...but I like the story behind the title. You still get to your's just more roundabout!

Edward was so sweet. I loved Esme and her and Edward's preparation for the journey. I am thinking that because of Edward's anxiety that Esme has felt more protective of him. He is also the last child leaving the seemed realistic for the story.

This wasn't only a journey in miles, but a journey in hearts. I enjoyed watching Bella and Edward being drawn to each other and finally admitting they have had feelings for each other for a long time. I loved the PDX market...I've gotten a Henna tat there too! Oh and San Fran is an amazing city...I think it's a wonderfully romantic city. Perfect for snuggling in bed!

I laughed at Edward's amazement at how much sugar Bella ate. I laughed even more when they met up with Renee and Edward found out this might not be the normal diet that Bella ate! Emmett was a crack up, but a wonderful true brother to Edward. I liked how you showed us Edward's emotions on leaving Col Springs. Edward was going to miss his brother.

It was a sweet journey and Bella and Edward finally admitted their love. I like how Edward said love couldn't be measured. So true. Enjoyed. Thank you for writing.
TeamKStewRPattz chapter 1 . 12/13/2010

I totally LOVE IT!

it was so LOVE to have a full story of it

really good just ADORABLE!
Sdjk chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
Very sweet and thoughtful. I enjoyed your story.
Kare831 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
I love insensible Edward! Very sweet story!
dwsjho-17 chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
a very wonderful story... i so love it.. 'grats!
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