|Reviews for Chocolate Kisses and Robinhood's Barn|
| fourbrats chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
That was so awesome and like usual I loved Emmett. This would be a great story to continue.
| ixzirose chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
Beautiful story. Please continue it after the competition is over. It would make a beautiful multi-chapter piece.
| AnniePattz376 chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
I loved it!
Bella is so damn lucky, she can eat all the candy that she wants and still be thin... and... she can have Edward!
I love nerd Edward, and yours was so damn cute!
I really loved your story.
| Edward-Jacob4ever01 chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
PLS IS THE ANYWAY U CAN CONTINUE THIS STORY PLS! I REALLY ENJOYED THIS STORY. AND I WOULD LOVE TO SEE HOW THEIR RELATIONSHIP LAST BEING IN COLLEGE WITH ALOTS OF DIFFRENT AND ATTRACTIVE PEOPLE IN COLLEGE(TANYA AND JACOB) OFCOURSE I AM FOR THE RELATIONSHIP OF EDWARD AND BELLA. SO I JUST HOPE THAT U DO CONTINUE THIS STORY SOON!
| mmecullen chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
Uber great story! :D
| BeatnikFreak chapter 2 . 12/11/2010
Aww, aww, aww, and aww again! This was so cute, and really well written.
I especially liked how quirky it all was, including Geekward and Bella's thing for sweets :) It read like a proper indie story, which is one of my favourite things ever! And woot for the title :D
I'd love it if you would write a sequel, to what happened after the bit on Capitol Hill?
| creyzi4Edward chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
i can't believe this is only an OS!this is definitely one of my faves!
| alisa231 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
I like the way you addressed Edward's anxiety. He wasn't magically healed but he also wasn't crippled by his disorder. You achieved a nice balance between the two extremes.
The little moments between Edward and Bella and their parents were my favorite. I loved Esme's worrying and Renee's obsession with organic food.
Thank you for sharing.
| shc92 chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
I loved this - so cute! Edward, such the gentleman and his asthma...lol. I loved how Bella pushed him enough to get things going. Esme worrying about her youngest (*love* that Edward had been buying her tampons since about age 12) with only a clumsy teenage girl for protection. Big Brother Em was awesome. I enjoyed their journey, and then this
"I didn't, however, need to see her peek down at my crotch."
Classic - free-spirit Bella and Edward trying...Title was very cool.
| redsnapdragon chapter 1 . 12/8/2010
Enjoyed it, very sweet :)
| stuff4ang chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
How sweet and wonderful...
"...when her lips touched mine, angels sang and the heavens shined their glorious light upon the world."
I really enjoyed reading about their adventure. The timing of everything just seemed so right for the two of them, especially since they both had had secret crushes for so long. *sigh* Thanks for sharing this story with us.
| Jancullenfever chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Brilliant ! Loved every letter ,every word .
Parents coddling him before his road trip ,Dad ensuring he was ,being safe and protecting himself .
Good ole Emmett!
| laddymischief chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
sofa king CUTE
this story was amazing :) im definitely voting for you!
| KatieBMizzou chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
Cute story. I love Edward a bit on the nerdy side. I love their road trip and feel like you did a good job of them falling love at a realistic pace. You get to know a lot about someone when you are in a car with them for days and days. You wrote a very sweet Bella as well. Good story, thanks for sharing.
| jemster23 chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
Great one shot. Edward was so adorable:) I would love to read more if you chose to continue this...