Who exactly is this sinister man that Nathan was so afraid of?

Good story

Interesting story. I'm glad Audrey was able to bring Nathan back. I liked how you used Duke in this story. I knew there was a decent guy in there somewhere. I am curious about one thing. Is the man Nathan saw in his delirium a figment of his imagination or is he some real evil that reaches people who are at that lull between life and death?

I also have to say that I thought Lai Jun Chen's "review" of your story was petty. I don't think there's anything wrong with constructive criticism, but that review did not seem constructive in the least. If this person is such an expert on how to write a consistent Haven story, I'd like to see him or her give it a shot.

the only thing remotely decent about this fic is that it is consisent. inconsistent!

Wonderful!

Hey! More stories from PunkyRabbit! I LOVE your stuff.

Characterization was bang on. Very sweet story.

So sweet. Nathan risked himself for her, and she saved him in return. Her whispering that she needed him was an awe moment; and Duke was at his best-which we have seen in the show.