Reviews for Before I Fall
BountyHunter1009 chapter 1 . 2/14/2012
That was great- I think you really captured how Mary feels about Lily. Nice job :)

Drakena the Destroyer chapter 1 . 1/12/2011
Konichi wa.

That was very well written. I like how you've captured Mary's feelings of guilt and sadness. Great story. ;)