Reviews for Soul of Grief
Absinthe HiddenCloak chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Wow! This is amazing! I read this through and thought, 'WOW! How surprising!'
0ptimuspenguin chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
huh. normally, I don't like Altair bottoming; however, your plotline here is unique and interesting, so I suppose I didn't mind too much. ;)

however, what did irritate me was your writing: there were some problems with tense and parallel continuity. nothing too awful.

tl;dr - for a first story, good job.
A Beautiful Oblivion chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
Oh, this is great :) This is such a unique idea, I've never seen ANYTHING like it. There's sex in other M-rated fics, yeah, but I don't think I've ever come across a rape story _

Fantastic job, my friend.
Dyodoro chapter 1 . 1/16/2011
Oh my goodness. This is absolutely amazing! It's very sad.. I wanted to cry so bad... ;_; You, my friend, are spectacular. The way you wrote the end was very good, and made me sit there and think real hard (and trying -very- hard not to bawl _). I hope you decide to write more stories. :D
kira1525 chapter 1 . 12/27/2010
That's Really Sad..Great Job! )
Bloody White Rabbit chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Great story... but made me sad, but you wrote it well and I loved the ending.
Valitiel chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
It's very good. I like the ending. It made me think a bit (then weep a bit) but it was good.