|Reviews for Avow|
| talimom1997 chapter 1 . 10/3/2013
I just found and loved this story. I love the way you write my favorite duo.
I NEEDED to continue to hear them being together after the airing of PP&F this week. I just don't' want to read Ziva exit stories. Thank you for leaving this little gem behind. It is less AU to me to experience the Tony and Ziva you wrote than the ones from Tuesday. Thank you again. I really, really needed to "see" them like this right now. Guess my NCIS will move to AU-land now.
| Catmint chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Excellent, fantastic writing. It's sad yet beautiful, and I love how you've written the interaction between Tony and Ziva.
| Amilyn chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
This...This is amazing. Like everything else. Gods...Eli is such an ASS. And this is just...TRUE...that he would use her as a pawn in such a way, that she would acknowledge the effectiveness of his tactic. Just...wow. And I can see tony hitting such a self-destructive place and getting high and having it be SO dangerous. You do amazing work creating believable backstory for them to share. I love the pact. Really excellent throughout. Painful, but with such effective catharsis; you walk a difficult line here SO well.
| Canada Dakota Faith Haswari chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Wow nice story
| AliyahNCIS chapter 1 . 8/18/2012
I love all of your stuff and this is no exception. Sad, heavy topic but I'm glad it got T&Z talking and I love their pact, especially sealing it with a kiss and Tony sitting on the floor of the bathroom to talk to her. Lovely. I can never get enough of these two. Thanks!
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
Love this. BTW, I was on your website, and I think that in 6.1 Ziva nodded to Michael, telling him to follow the woman. They were partners for that mission.
| JoBelle chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
I love the quiet comfort of this fic, it creates a feeling like a warm blanket wrapped around your shoulders while it storms outside :)
Your Ziva's explanation of her first suicide attempt broke my heart and Tony's quiet confession about his mom made me gasp. I love how open they are with each other here, the tub, the bed, gorgeous. I LOVE the line about the thing between them not demanding release that night, so perfect! I LOL-d at Tony's request for breakfast :) Also Your Agent Walter just from T&Z's pov is so real. Excellent fic! :)
| Hiby248248 chapter 1 . 3/10/2012
That was one of the best fics I have ever read. Made me cry and smile at the same time. Perfection.
| Hannelovestiva chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Wow.. that was simply one of the best stories I ever read..
Filled with pain, angst and humour between our two favorite characters..
WHile I was reading this I pictured the entire thing in my head.. never had that happened to me before.
Would love is something like this happened on the show, although we've had "similar" things - especially when Jenny died, their moment in autopsy..
Thank you so much for this story.. it's going straight into my favorite
| Aurelie G chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
love it !
thank you !
| Angela On My Shoulder chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
Incredible, true to life and powerful in the simplest way. I have read this literally dozens of times and it never fails to impress me.
| Liraeyn chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
I really like it. For once, a Ziva-suicide fic that's not stupid or repetitive.
| yen35 chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
A superbly written and powerful story by you that made this drab Saturday afternoon appear way brighter. I loved the whole story from start to finish - starting with the agent's suicide, that very interesting conversation in the bathroom and then the conclusion in the bedroom. Would have loved to know what Tony thought of Ziva when they first met tho! And I had to wrack my brain to think what MOAS was before recollecting that it was 'mother of all secrets'. Very nicely done and I will be hunting around for more of your work. By the way,I do agree with you that the show itself does not know how to deal with the Somalia incident and aftermath.
| BeautyOfTheDark-KLM chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Wow, this is pretty amazing. The words are beautiful and you stay in character throughout. I love
the way you wrote this and I have to say as much as I love the light fluffy stuff it's good to read something a little darker now and then. I enjoy seeing these two have to face these more serious issues and work through them together.
The first of your stories I've read bit I defintely plan to read more :) who knows, maybe I'll become your biggest fan ;) haha
good work x
| Fed up with this crap chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Wow, losing someone to suicide is very bad indeed. Gone through it too many times for my liking and you portrayed the survivors pretty good. Just in case you're wondering Survivors as in the people left behind not survivors as someone who attempted it and survived. I'm finding stories tonight where common sense has flown out the window even by author's I thought wrote well in the past lol. Good story.