Reviews for Sleeping With The Enemy
Shy Whisper Of Life chapter 1 . 9/19/2014
Hey! I really like the concept of this story, but if I could offer some advice, I would look into asking someone to beta read for you. Your grammar in some parts makes it really difficult to understand what's going on, and some more details throughout would be helpful. I really like what you have here, but the grammar mistakes make it really difficult to get through. I know this is an old story, but I think it would be worth editing to fix the grammar and make what you want to say clearer because I don't really understand a lot of what is going on. I mean, I get the major points, but the intricate details are fuzzy for me.

Shy-chan :3
Undercoverbarbie chapter 13 . 1/10/2014
ah what an awesome adventure! sasuke is still a jerk :p
fairlysimple16 chapter 13 . 6/6/2012
Awww this is a good story :) I liked the ending, it was cute :D
Anon chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Why in the world do you have the story formatted in the center of the page? Don't you know that makes it harder for people to read it on the screen?
Light-Sakura chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
To be honest not the best ending I read but still good. This fanfiction is good and update again if you can or want to.

I had a good reading this!
tatoo26 chapter 13 . 9/30/2011
the song was taylor swift's Sparks Fly :)

i love that song!

the ending was nice, sasuke came back :]
Saki-Hime chapter 13 . 9/29/2011
Awww, at least he will do as she says. Good story, enjoyed reading it.
Djomar chapter 12 . 7/26/2011
Sasuke really is an idiot
Light-Sakura chapter 12 . 7/26/2011
Poor Hinata... Great chapter and update soon as you can.
Saki-Hime chapter 12 . 7/25/2011
Awww so sad, why he leaving? He can't, no now. Good chapter, update soon.
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 12 . 7/25/2011
cool
Light-Sakura chapter 11 . 7/3/2011
I don't mind waiting because I know most people try to update when they can. Besides this chapter was great!
Djomar chapter 11 . 7/2/2011
Hinata won't die right?why is Tsunade crying?
Saki-Hime chapter 11 . 7/1/2011
Just make Hinata live and you will be forgiven. Good chapter, update soon.
Lucy Ash Hawthorne chapter 11 . 7/1/2011
can i adopt this if you don't finish it?
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