|Reviews for The Gringotts Account|
| angelflowers chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
hi just read your story and i have to say im not at all impressed. your assumption that london wouldnt have any basements is incorrect. london does have many basements or cellars as we english call them, not to mention the london underground network and sewer systems. jkr even mentions the underground in ootp or did u not read this? i have to agree with bills argument regarding willow. why is she able to bypass the wizarding worlds security almost immediately? those measures were in place for thousands of years and suddenly one powerful muggle wiccan is able to get into diagon alley and the leaky cauldron immediately? sorry not buying it. also andrew would not have been able to gain access to the leaky cauldron by being pushed. there are muggle repelling charms on the building as witnessed by harry in philosophers stone. also in the books are not given the prefix mr. also why are ppl obliviating left right and centre? if muggles wandered into the leaky cauldron aurors would be called and a full investigation would be undertaken into the breach and how access was gained before just randomly obliviating people. also as an english person i was very offended by your casual dismissal of the english language as inferior to your "american". your "american" is actually english brought from england when the english inhabited the country in the 1400's. the spellings of certain words have just changed. i would not be so quick to dismiss the language you use. just so you know im not flaming you, this is just meant as constructive criticism. other than my points you have a good basis for a story, but you could make it even better!
| borg rabbit chapter 3 . 6/23/2011
Haiku of acknowledgement:
Just now reaching chapter three
Muse be kind to thee
Don't be a stranger,
Be an update Ranger!
| blue talith chapter 3 . 4/15/2011
And now the holidays are over, it is my sincere wish that Lancer47 is able to come back and finish this remarkable story!
| RANGER99 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
London may be just above sea level but there are plenty of basements around and think... this is the watchers council no doubt they would have had a dungon or 2 there to use as a holding area or a place to 'question/torture' people. Also there is the London underground and miles of tunnels beneath the ancient city.
| enchantedlight chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
great chapter update soon!
| Allen Pitt chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
It is hard to 'mesh' Willow's magic & power level with wizards. Hm..they probably have more fine control, she has more raw power. Plus there are lots of them and only one of her... Charms they can probably do better than her...? She really needs to take on an apprentice or two, right now she's their only magical big gun.
At a guess, L Malfoy will tie this application up in the Wizangamot... especially as, if it's post HP breaking into Gringotts, death eaters are pretty much in charge of the Ministry.
| Bobboky chapter 3 . 12/22/2010
| I'm Only A Reader chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I, myself, wouldn't mind if Willow is the "End All and Be All" of witches; in opposition and in contrast to "Bill's" opinion (see bellow). I think it would be an interesting idea if Tom Riddle (Voldemort) faced, confronted, Willow Rosenberg. Poor old Tom would be out matched.
Willow was the Darkest Lady compared to the Dark Lord. Willow had, and still has, the power to plunge the world into hell, and then destroy it; killing everyone and everything. Willow could have been compared to thermonuclear weapon, while Voldemort is a British Sten submachine gun. The Sten gun is quite deadly and was put to good use in World II; it probably was responsible for more deaths then "Fat Man" and "Little Boy", dropped on Nagasaki and Hiroshima, over the course of years. The Sten gun, or any machine gun, can't kill as many, as quickly, as a Hydrogen bomb.
Willow is now the "Lady of Light". Her brightness is holding back a darkness that makes Voldemort a dim light. Tom Riddle (Voldemort) is after greatness in the quickest way possible for him: evil. Willow is Greatness!
I haven't read "Harry Potter and the Deathly Hollows". I'm not even going to see the movie in a theatre. I will read this story. Have the Slayers and Willow fight the Deatheaters. Have them over power the Ministry of Magic. Have them save the lives of Tonks and Remus. Have Buffy cut down deatheaters in their smokey intangible state with the Scythe.
| flyboy321 chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
good story, don't know why there would be a problem with sub basements in London, remember the London Underground is 100 feet under London if not deeper at some places.
| Bobboky chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
| Bill chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
Do you know what makes for a good Buffy Crossover story is were Willow is not the End all be all of Magic users. It gets to be harder and harder to find a crossover story were that does not happen. To many people think that Buffy and her gang of friends haft to have no equals at all when it comes to fighting the forces of Evil. I mean come on if a AK can be turned back on the user so esaily don't you think the Wizards in the Potter verus would be able to do that all the time. With Harry no longer being the only one to do that very thing. What had started to look like a good story has now crashed and burn on take off. If you had't gone and made this Buffy and Co. with no equals I think I might of stuck around to see what came next. I give this story a rating of EPIC FAIL!
| dreameralways chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
This is funny and awesome. I look forward to more.
| enchantedlight chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
great chapter! update soon!
| Allen Pitt chapter 2 . 11/15/2010
so this is taking place before V's defeat. Ouchy. Makes it more interesting for them, though. The goblins are just not having a good day; next a visit by a bunch of slayers, should be even more fun for them.
* Gotta wonder what magical artifacts might be stored in the Council vault in addition to gold. Hm, any witches get activated as slayers? Also, if reports reach V. of this, he'll think Faith is "the" slayer...
| Bobboky chapter 1 . 11/14/2010