|Reviews for I Won't Forget You|
| Ultimate Black Ace chapter 1 . 11/22/2011
Great one-shot. It is so bittersweet, mostly bitter though.
| MizukiMai chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Well, I liked it, even if In A Quandary didn't. I really thought this was well-written and loved it.
I thought that the first and last little three-line messages were really good and kind of pulled it all together. I love it!
| mrl98 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Sad and cute! AND ROKUSHI 8D! I think u did a good job on this!
| In a Quandary chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Hmm. I don't really have a strong opinion of this fic. On one hand, it's decently-written (at least on the technical side), on the other, it is rather bland and doesn't stick out in any discernible way.
Since this fic is in first-person, it should have been written in present tense. Past tense has a tendency to subdue emotional narration. And the dialogue from memories - which includes almost all the dialogue in this fic - ought to be italicized.
Also, I am confused as to when this scene occurs in the KH chronology. Is it after Roxas has fused with Sora? If so, is it at the end or the beginning of KHII? This is an important plot point that your fic failed to address.
| SilverWings104 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Awww...that was a really cute one-shot. I really liked it :)