Reviews for The Laws of Motion
silvermyth chapter 1 . 12/31/2015
Omg, this is adorable! 10/10! Very cute, thank you for writing! Now time to read the rest...
Riku Lyonheart chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
oooh! Band! Im a band geek too! not Marching band, but most of my friends are in it. I do JROTC instead... I love this!
darkgaaraluver chapter 3 . 6/8/2015
I've actually read this fix AT LEAST 20 times and I never get sick of it and it occurred to me that I've never reviewed it (I think) so THIS FIC IS MY NUMBER ONE KH FIC (Tied with AM Static I mean seriously I read that one 50 million times too). I was in chorus for nine years (not band (after elementary school anyway I played clarinet)) But my cousin was the music teacher so I was constantly hanging around and stuff. Also I got to carry the banner cause I was good at marching and I got the people water and stuff. ANYWAY It's cool to read a story about something like this in a setting like this. It really reminded me of all that stuff that I really miss now that I've graduated and it's just amazing thank you so much! :)
MiniBandit chapter 3 . 5/6/2015
Bravo bravo! D': *claps*

I'm so in love with this story, I couldn't put it down. It was so perfect. Now I'm so sad that it is over D: Zexion was so sweet and it was just... Perfect.

Absolutely one of my lifetime favorite stories.
wooyhun chapter 3 . 5/2/2015
omg this fic broke me ITS SO GOOD LIKE? this is legit one of my favourite fics now ok

i have a weird fascination with slightly more abstract AUs and this was so satisfying, im srs. i never really knew a lot about marching band and everything that went into it, but this has actually made me come to appreciate it and i think it's actually really cool and yeah

the cute ass fuckin zemyx at the end also gave me crazy butterflies so u go glen coco

i suck at reviews im sry but i just like this fic a lot
drakillya chapter 3 . 4/14/2015
oh my godddd this was so cute 3 reminds me of high school marching band all over again aahhh
Anon chapter 3 . 3/25/2015
Hey I know this is a very late review and I don't know if you even read these anymore. But I'd just wanted to let you know just how much your cheesy as hell stories mean to me. I suffer from severe depression and every time ive felt like life Isnt worth it any more ive gone back and read some of Your stories. I've read this story at least 10 times in the past 4 years. And every single time I read it I feel a little bit better. And I just wanted to thank you for giving me that little help I needed through those times even though you didn't know it. But yeah...
Guest chapter 3 . 3/4/2015
Krhslcbaavnla 3

I think I fell in love with Zemyx AND Akuroku all over again.

I loved everything about this. Thank you.
CaffeinatedKitty chapter 3 . 12/24/2013
Oh my gosh x) best ending ever! :D I'm glad they all worked their problems c: yes, last year's lower state competition was freezing but this years was so hot we all almost melted XD I can't wait until the day we get to hop on a charter bus and go to state finals... Which we haven't ever done before :c but oh my gosh, I'm going to miss our seniors so much next year... D: though at least one of the drum line seniors is coming back to help the noobs XD well, I must thank you for this awesome story! :D
CaffeinatedKitty chapter 2 . 12/24/2013
Holy crap, this is making me wish that the next seven months would pass so much faster. I can't wait till next season! :D our band camp isn't like this though... We just have to show up at the high school at noon and stay there until like seven. XD I miraculously escaped sunburn though XD just got a bit tanned XD but oh my gosh it did hurt... SO. MUCH. XD
Axel really screwed up this time... He'd better fix this... At least Demyx is getting to know Zexion better c: and Roxas really is scary... Almost as scary as Larxene... O.O that's a feat. We never actually had to run laps, though it was a constant threat... But we did have to do push-ups. Several times. XD
CaffeinatedKitty chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
YES. This is just like marching band XD and I can totally see our drumline doing that... XD though I'm not quite certain what 'polish duty' is because I'm in PIT, not the actual drumline... XD but yes, so much romance XD I actually ship two of our snare drummers as well as our drum set guy and our synthesizer guy XD
But I can tell I'm going to love this :D I kinda hope their band DOES win... And was the diner being on the corner of 8th and 13th a reference to AkuRoku? XD
roxxzaf chapter 2 . 11/21/2013
I know it's a few years late but I freakin' love this 3 it's so fabulous and surprisingly realistic (especially soap opera like relationships.) I was in marching band in high school, the best thing that happened was finally getting a marimba that had wheels that turned.. it's hard to turn a marimba on a track with only straight wheels :x
AnimeObsessedKitty chapter 3 . 10/7/2013
Naaaaaaaaaaw, that was sooooo sweet! And it made me laugh so hard at some points. Speaking of, remind me to never, ever again read your fanfiction while ironing. I almost burnt myself laughing. Thanks for the fantastic story, as always!
auPHE chapter 3 . 8/26/2013
literally crying forever omg ; o;
Machi chapter 3 . 8/16/2013
Oh gosh, this chapter actually made me cry. Not from sadness, since this is obviously not a sad story, but from the exquisite way you captured the insane pride and intensity that is a marchingbandhigh. I could feel it bubbling up inside me just reading it.
On another note, in my band, if someone ruffled a plume the way Riku did to Demyx's, or even so much as TOUCHED the precious plume, the uniform managers would murder them in as excruciatingly slow and painful a way as they could imagine. Just saying :D
And don't ever apologise for being cheesy! It's your cheesiness that makes me grin like a lunatic!
Because I've recently become addicted to reading and reviewing so many of your stories, I've considered making an account on here so I can review as an actual user. So far it hasn't worked out, something about my iPod is being stupid, but I just wanted you to know I'm working on it, just for you :D
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