|Reviews for You Are Here|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/12/2013
Loved it and the end was so sweet 33
| CoffeeSlut chapter 1 . 8/22/2013
I really enjoyed that- and sending the sunglasses, what a cute touch!
| Sarah chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Years later, I still come back to this story. One of my faves.
| Fuck'Yeah-21 chapter 1 . 5/17/2013
Aww I loved the message " You are here " at the end. So cute *_*
Otherwise, this OS was so HOT ! I LOVED it.
Fantastic job ;)
| marais chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
| Reikajen chapter 1 . 2/12/2013
Love it :) I wish you could write a second chapter when he come back :)
| Yoruichi89 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
| dixiedream1n chapter 1 . 9/20/2012
That's not just hot... it's also so incredibly sweet at the end there. You really feel for these two, separated like this. "You are here"... just... I just don't have the words for the feeling. Beautiful.
| Wolfgirl022 chapter 1 . 8/4/2012
| ilikegoo chapter 1 . 6/18/2012
Brilliant story! Really enjoyed it )
| Time Lady 802379 chapter 1 . 6/17/2012
Is it bad that I favourited this just for the adorable bit right at the end? *Shrug*
| H50girl chapter 1 . 5/31/2012
Awwwww. At the end the you are here got me. Sooooo sweet!
| Unknown21 chapter 1 . 5/26/2012
Okay, you're adorable. Just plain, straight, adorable. I loved the ending and it played in so perfectly in the story, it nearly made me giggle. And I hardly ever giggle, my friend.
Wonderful job, please keep writing, I hang onto every word.
| Gene'sGenie1969 chapter 1 . 5/22/2012
Oh you clever thing, how did you manage to make me all hot and bothered one minute and then almost in tears with the sweetness of the end? Just lovely, honestly :)
| Aynessa chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
Um. As an extreme fan of the Japanese culture and language, I would like to point out that nyotaimori is NOT an accepted business practice for outings. It is in fact an extremely rare occurence, expounded upon to overblown proportions in worldwide media, and the fact that it is a rare and seedy underground event akin to the equivalent of a drug cartel's underground dog-fighting ring is rather ignored in the long run. The chance of Tony and his business associates going to a bar with nyotaimori is not only highly unlikely considering how rare it happens, but it also would involve them getting mugged for their fancy attire either in the bar itself or in its surrounding area.
Just my little nitpick of the day. *cough*
Oh, and a little helpful hint: Tony says "Anata ga koishii" to Pepper. That's actually nonsensical, considering that koishii is a verb and not a noun, which is used to describe the act of missing someone you love or care for greatly (though several fanfiction authors incorrectly use it as a noun to mean "beloved"). Now, I'm not quite sure what you were going for, but if you wanted him to say "you are my beloved" then it would most likely be "Kimi wa ore no saiai," although it would be unlikely for someone to express themself in this way. Nonetheless...'kimi' is a less formal and more affectionate word for 'you' which Tony would most likely use. Plus 'anata' is more widely used by females than males. I use 'ore' for Tony because he would most definitely use that form of 'I', confident narcissist that he is.
I took a rather unhealthy amount of joy in their phone sex, lol. And I especially loved the ending, although I confess I was hoping for a longfic...teehee.