Reviews for Dragonball FL
jack chapter 12 . 4/1/2014
goku should have one the fight what is this the truth revealed should have said that goku held back because he didn't want to upset vegeta
jack Curry chapter 1 . 3/31/2014
i think you should add master roshi because he never really died and because he drank from the fountain of youth is still live and well and i think it would be cool bringing him back in to maybe help train goku jr
l chapter 8 . 5/1/2011
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godzilla90fan chapter 1 . 3/27/2011
wow great story keep writing and you get revive just keep it up and p.s. if you don't update soon Chuck Norris will come for you!
Joe B chapter 8 . 3/9/2011
To write a fight scene you can use a narrative in red. In other words, you can write one complete thought in one sentence with a red colored highlite. An alternative is that you can do it based on having the narrator's line in between the characters spaces so you can have vegeta say something or do something before the narrator says what happens next. Then you can have Goku do the samething but in a conversational physical play like fight scene. If you do not wish to do that you can just keep up with what type of writing style you have done throughout this story so far! Anyway this story so far has been awsome! It really has me captured and interested!
Sajid Hassan chapter 8 . 2/9/2011
Its so great to read someone's fic, who has the love,respect for Dragon Ball /Z/GT and also the passion to extend the series, however we can't do anything to convince him to really extend the GT series with a new series or movies. So anyway about my real review: The fic was the best I've ever read, however i didn't get why u let that weakling and noway a full/ half/ quarter saiyan Puck in on the action? Okay, a good idea: U can let Trunks seeing his father, the others again and for Gohan and Videl in seeing their relatives well thuh! And as for Goku and Vegita's fight, Vegita has learnt to transform to SSJ5 when he trained in his SSJ4 with a little help from Bulma and the new minds of his daughter, grand daughter, who adjusted his private gravity chamber to whilst lets say 100000 times gravity or more and also the intense climate, weather and reflections/appearances of Frieza, King Cold, Cooler, Cell, Majin Buu, Bebe, Super Android 17, Omega Shenron and ofcourse Goku in each capacity. For example: Frieza and his family in the easy gravtational levels, then Cell and his munchkins in the slight difficult levels, Majin Buu in his most powerful and evil state with Bebe in the medium levels, Super Android 17 and Omega Shenrong in the hardest levels, Goku just appearing a little and showing off that he reached yet again another saiyan level or levels before the mighty prince/ king of all saiyans just to tease Vegita and ofcourse angering him to be a SSJ5, or even 6 destroying the chamber or not, heck u might even add a little leamon of V/B, T/M etc. Jeck u can let the samething about the entire Son family or a little different, ur choice, heck Trunks and Vegita Kurillen could help and train with their father/ great grand father and gor the kids their grandfather and grand uncle with Trunks not aging and staying in his GT state and maybe being able to transform to his SSJ4 and again for the kids. Their SSJ2 well then they can also be able to face the past enemies of the saiyans alongside Vegita, who gave in to the thought of having a father & son/ great grandfather & great grandsons after seeing Trunks', Vegita Kurillen's most adorable puppy dog faces. U might also do the same with the Son boys and men in the hyperbolic time chamber, with rest week to snuggle, play with their mates; while letting the Briefs men a little time. Heck u can change a little and make different chapters? I know this idea would be a super saiyan 4 skyrocket. What do u think and plzplz,plz make the other chapters quickly and atlast ending in a Briefs and Son men and boys super, ultimate clas with: Trunks , Vegita jr. Vs. Goku ofcource the grand slam Vegita Vs. Goku. U may also put in a few tagteam or fusion fights of Gotenks in their/his SSJ4 with Gogeta in SSJ4 or Gogeta SSJ2. I really loved ur fic so write very very soon!
Sajid Hassan chapter 8 . 2/9/2011
Its so great to read someone's fic, who has the love,respect for Dragon Ball /Z/GT and also the passion to extend the series, however we can't do anything to convince him to really extend the GT series with a new series or movies. So anyway about my real review: The fic was the best I've ever read, however i didn't get why u let that weakling and noway a full/ half/ quarter saiyan Puck in on the action? Okay, a good idea: U can let Trunks seeing his father, the others again and for Gohan and Videl in seeing their relatives well thuh! And as for Goku and Vegita's fight, Vegita has learnt to transform to SSJ5 when he trained in his SSJ4 with a little help from Bulma and the new minds of his daughter, grand daughter, who adjusted his private gravity chamber to whilst lets say 100000 times gravity or more and also the intense climate, weather and reflections/appearances of Frieza, King Cold, Cooler, Cell, Majin Buu, Bebe, Super Android 17, Omega Shenron and ofcourse Goku in each capacity. For example: Frieza and his family in the easy gravtational levels, then Cell and his munchkins in the slight difficult levels, Majin Buu in his most powerful and evil state with Bebe in the medium levels, Super Android 17 and Omega Shenrong in the hardest levels, Goku just appearing a little and showing off that he reached yet again another saiyan level or levels before the mighty prince/ king of all saiyans just to tease Vegita and ofcourse angering him to be a SSJ5, or even 6 destroying the chamber or not, heck u might even add a little leamon of V/B, T/M etc. Jeck u can let the samething about the entire Son family or a little different, ur choice, heck Trunks and Vegita Kurillen could help and train with their father/ great grand father and gor the kids their grandfather and grand uncle with Trunks not aging and staying in his GT state and maybe being able to transform to his SSJ4 and again for the kids. Their SSJ2 well then they can also be able to face the past enemies of the saiyans alongside Vegita, who gave in to the thought of having a father & son/ great grandfather & great grandsons after seeing Trunks', Vegita Kurillen's most adorable puppy dog faces. U might also do the same with the Son boys and men in the hyperbolic time chamber, with rest week to snuggle, play with their mates; while letting the Briefs men a little time. Heck u can change a little and make different chapters? I know this idea would be a super saiyan 4 skyrocket. What do u think and plzplz,plz make the other chapters quickly and atlast ending in a Briefs and Son men and boys super, ultimate clas with: Trunks , Vegita jr. Vs. Goku ofcource the grand slam Vegita Vs. Goku. U may also put in a few tagteam or fusion fights of Gotenks in their/his SSJ4 with Gogeta in SSJ4 or Gogeta SSJ2. I really loved ur fic so write very very soon!
Sajid Hassan chapter 8 . 2/9/2011
Its so great to read someone's fic, who has the love,respect for Dragon Ball /Z/GT and also the passion to extend the series, however we can't do anything to convince him to really extend the GT series with a new series or movies. So anyway about my real review: The fic was the best I've ever read, however i didn't get why u let that weakling and noway a full/ half/ quarter saiyan Puck in on the action? Okay, a good idea: U can let Trunks seeing his father, the others again and for Gohan and Videl in seeing their relatives well thuh! And as for Goku and Vegita's fight, Vegita has learnt to transform to SSJ5 when he trained in his SSJ4 with a little help from Bulma and the new minds of his daughter, grand daughter, who adjusted his private gravity chamber to whilst lets say 100000 times gravity or more and also the intense climate, weather and reflections/appearances of Frieza, King Cold, Cooler, Cell, Majin Buu, Bebe, Super Android 17, Omega Shenron and ofcourse Goku in each capacity. For example: Frieza and his family in the easy gravtational levels, then Cell and his munchkins in the slight difficult levels, Majin Buu in his most powerful and evil state with Bebe in the medium levels, Super Android 17 and Omega Shenrong in the hardest levels, Goku just appearing a little and showing off that he reached yet again another saiyan level or levels before the mighty prince/ king of all saiyans just to tease Vegita and ofcourse angering him to be a SSJ5, or even 6 destroying the chamber or not, heck u might even add a little leamon of V/B, T/M etc. Jeck u can let the samething about the entire Son family or a little different, ur choice, heck Trunks and Vegita Kurillen could help and train with their father/ great grand father and gor the kids their grandfather and grand uncle with Trunks not aging and staying in his GT state and maybe being able to transform to his SSJ4 and again for the kids. Their SSJ2 well then they can also be able to face the past enemies of the saiyans alongside Vegita, who gave in to the thought of having a father & son/ great grandfather & great grandsons after seeing Trunks', Vegita Kurillen's most adorable puppy dog faces. U might also do the same with the Son boys and men in the hyperbolic time chamber, with rest week to snuggle, play with their mates; while letting the Briefs men a little time. Heck u can change a little and make different chapters? I know this idea would be a super saiyan 4 skyrocket. What do u think and plzplz,plz make the other chapters quickly and atlast ending in a Briefs and Son men and boys super, ultimate clas with: Trunks , Vegita jr. Vs. Goku ofcource the grand slam Vegita Vs. Goku. U may also put in a few tagteam or fusion fights of Gotenks in their/his SSJ4 with Gogeta in SSJ4 or Gogeta SSJ2. I really loved ur fic so write very very soon!
Vegito9000 chapter 8 . 1/28/2011
Awesome it up.

Suggestions for your story.

1)When Goku and Vegeta fight could Goku Jr. and Vegeta Jr. figh each other as well?

2)Could Goku fight Goku jr, and Vegeta vs Vegeta Jr.?

Just suggestions your story is really cool.
Adam chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
Ooh just started reading this but I'm hooked. Not much to comment on but keep writing!
Fulmina XII chapter 6 . 1/2/2011
Good work but why would you skip 4 or 5 dragonballs
samurai-shiv chapter 5 . 12/30/2010
gud story so update soon.

Are u gonna bring back the z-fighters?

just a thought. :)
samurai-shiv chapter 4 . 12/15/2010
really good start
AnimeGirl4444 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Thanks
J.W. Appel chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Cool start!