|Reviews for The Devil's Kiss|
| hotta chapter 1 . 8/22
Serously I've never read such good threesome like yours before of these three, your writing is really phenomenal
| kennisha.james chapter 1 . 6/30
Mmmm very...entertaining. Loved it
| Yulisa chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Did you get this from the Sex Therapist manga?
| briar black death rose chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
this was super good :) some of the best stories come from dreams
| TealEyedBeing chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Shiro was so ravished x3
| RhavenL chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
That was hot.
| Eien no yoru chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
luv luv LLLUUUUVVVVV this
| Mizuki Inuzuka chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This is really great...I totally love it but you need to work on your spelling...I understand what you mean but it is kinda annoying/distracting to decipher it, especially when reading something interesting. Other than the spelling, it's really well written!
| Crazyitachi-la-malade-de-Shaka chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I love it! The atmosphere is just so wonderful! Between dream and reality, we're a bit lost and your writing style matches perfectly with the topic!
Good job and thanks a lot for it!
| Dusk Sailing chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
i love this it something that most people wouldent think of ] great idea and great writing style
| TheDawn'sShadow chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I love this! It was perfect
| Tainted Rhapsody chapter 1 . 4/14/2011
Although I don't usually like a seme-ish Ichi, that was extremely sexy. I like how you made him sensual, but not too slutty; he still had class, which I like. I usually try to avoid Lemons where the uke is the pushy one (I'm weird, I know), but you pulled this off beautifully .
Nicely written, in character, and as usual, drool-inducing.
| Baskets chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
That was fucking amazing! My Gosh, I swear you must be trying to kill me with the amount of hotness. GrimmIchiHichi nnngngghhh.
So wish this wasn't a one shot. So much potential for continuing.
Loved it, love yer writing style too.
| NDebN chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
It's a good one-shot, it does seem familiar to me, not sure if you are familiar with the manga sex therapist. But the idea is pretty much the same, but still your writing is good
| spike4theworld chapter 1 . 3/17/2011
I know i'm late but this a great lol hey that rhyme hehehe it was a nice story tho