Reviews for The Devil's Kiss
Sepulvedlore chapter 1 . 5/2/2016
My gawwwwwdddddddd i fucking loved it it. Uterly loved it. Damn right loved itttttttttt
hotta chapter 1 . 8/22/2015
Serously I've never read such good threesome like yours before of these three, your writing is really phenomenal
kenni-bun bun chapter 1 . 6/30/2015
Mmmm very...entertaining. Loved it
Yulisa chapter 1 . 5/26/2013
Did you get this from the Sex Therapist manga?
briar black death rose chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
this was super good :) some of the best stories come from dreams
TealEyedBeing chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Shiro was so ravished x3
RhavenL chapter 1 . 11/5/2011
That was hot.
Eien no yoru chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
luv luv LLLUUUUVVVVV this
Mizuki Inuzuka chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
This is really great...I totally love it but you need to work on your spelling...I understand what you mean but it is kinda annoying/distracting to decipher it, especially when reading something interesting. Other than the spelling, it's really well written!
Crazyitachi-la-malade-de-Shaka chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
I love it! The atmosphere is just so wonderful! Between dream and reality, we're a bit lost and your writing style matches perfectly with the topic!

Good job and thanks a lot for it!

Dusk Sailing chapter 1 . 6/14/2011
i love this it something that most people wouldent think of ] great idea and great writing style
TheDawn'sShadow chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
I love this! It was perfect
Tainted Rhapsody chapter 1 . 4/14/2011

Although I don't usually like a seme-ish Ichi, that was extremely sexy. I like how you made him sensual, but not too slutty; he still had class, which I like. I usually try to avoid Lemons where the uke is the pushy one (I'm weird, I know), but you pulled this off beautifully .

Nicely written, in character, and as usual, drool-inducing.

~Tainted Rhapsody~
Miastic chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
That was fucking amazing! My Gosh, I swear you must be trying to kill me with the amount of hotness. GrimmIchiHichi nnngngghhh.


So wish this wasn't a one shot. So much potential for continuing.


Loved it, love yer writing style too.
NDebN chapter 1 . 3/30/2011
It's a good one-shot, it does seem familiar to me, not sure if you are familiar with the manga sex therapist. But the idea is pretty much the same, but still your writing is good
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