|Reviews for Kamen Rider Century|
| The Kingdom of Ruby Luxuria chapter 7 . 5/22/2011
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 6 . 4/6/2011
NICE CHAPTER AND EVERYTHING, LOVED THE GUY USING MY RIDER, YAHAHAHAHAHA
| starofjustice chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
The random kid was supposed to be Naruto? Guess I didn't get that because I don't watch that show. Anyway, I'll assume he showed up along with the penguins because of the day the story got updated.
Still and all, I had a harder time keeping up with this chapter than I did with the System ones. Maybe I'm supposed to come into this having read some of the original story, but since this is a spiritual sequel of Decade (maybe even an actual sequel), I keep expecting it to be like Decade in that it helps a little to know about the original story, but isn't strictly necessary. A little paragraph explaining the deal with this world's Riders and the monsters they fight would've been good. Since they use books to travel to the different worlds you'd think those books would have that information.
| Shuriken16 chapter 6 . 4/1/2011
Well besides the punctuation errors, it wasn't bad at all. Although you didn't explain why the Penguins of Madagascar was there like u promised, and the whole thing w/ naruto is pretty random
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 5 . 3/23/2011
PRETTY GOOD, YOU MIGHT WANT TO CONSIDER SPACING IT OUT A BIT. I DON'T REMEMBER THAT FORM BEING SYSTEMS LIKE WE TALKED ABOUT. OR MAYBE I'M THINKING OF ANOTHER FIC, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| starofjustice chapter 4 . 2/10/2011
A step up from before, as noted the new chapter is a lot more readable than previous ones. Paragraph breaks and capitalization have seen improvement.
One area where it still lags, though, is in making sense to new readers. I've read some of Kamen Rider System, so I kept up a little better than in Miuchi Roc's story. But still, this chapter didn't do much to really explain who System and his enemies are. It wasn't clear what made those four guys turn into monsters and attack Century. Were they supposed to be the things that give System his different modes? That was the impression I got, but why did they turn a couple teenagers into monsters, instead of trying to get System to check the guy out?
The are other things, like a bit more detail than we really need (like the part where everything in Minoru and Suzu's lunches are described), but I see progress. I also liked how Century doesn't kick the local Rider's butt to show how tough he is, although I can think of a few reasons why.
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
OC NOT CHAPTER, SCREWED THAT UP, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 4 . 2/9/2011
WHAT THE HELL? WHEN DID THIS FIC BECOME READABLE? I ACTUALLY LIKE IT MORE, DO THIS MORE! ALOT MORE! BECUASE NOW I'M INTERESTED, EVEN IF IT'S NOT MY CHAPTERS, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| starofjustice chapter 3 . 1/5/2011
Decade as a show was a lot more epic than well-written, but it managed to be fun all the same because of the huge crossover that was going on. Yet it managed to be accessible because to get into it, you just needed to know what a Kamen Rider was because the worlds were loosely based on the shows rather than visiting the worlds of the actual shows. You didn't have to have actually seen all the shows it was looking back on, like I hadn't. Like I still haven't.
Eternal, on the other hand, is an actual crossover with the actual settings and characters of the stories being visited. Maybe this will be better next time, but I didn't find this first serial very reader-friendly with me not having reading Miuchi Roc. And no offense, but this story isn't good enough for me to make the effort of getting caught up on the other stories (the ones I can even find) so this one will make sense. The descriptions are sketchy, and spelling and capitalization could use some work.
Also, I asked myself a few times while I was reading "Why don't I just watch Decade instead?" It's the exact same thing. The other Riders think he's trying to destroy the universe and try to kill him, he uses a special card to turn the guy's body into a weapon, the first Rider he meets decides to come with him as he goes through the different dimensions. The only thing different was instead of the villain saying humans suck and the hero saying the local Rider proves why he's wrong, he gives the local Rider a lesson instead. I guess I just don't get why you'd make up a whole new Rider and everything when he's pretty much Decade, doing exactly what Decade did. I got some kind of feeling that maybe he's using an upgraded version of Decade's suit or something, but the actual premise (he's a dimension-jumping Kamen Rider and everybody he meets thinks he's a bad guy) is the exact same thing as the show you based this off of.
I guess you might be interested in this if you really liked one of the stories Eternal crosses over with, but the only one I'm familiar with is System and after this I really don't have high hopes for how that'll turn out (no offense, Kisdota).
I won't harp on how there's a "real" Rider named Eternal, but I do find it strange how you have a disclaimer in your stories when you're using the name of a trademarked character different from the one you're writing about.
| Kamen Rider D'espair chapter 2 . 1/3/2011
I guess I'll be the asshole. If your aware that their is already a Kamen Rider named Eteranl then don't use that name as the name of an OC Rider...it's fucking stupid. You got a good idea just not the right name, you mentioned infinty symbols on your Rider? Call him Kamen Rider Infinity then, NOT ETERNAL! Oh and while I know I'm not perfect, bro it wouldn't kill you to use a spell check and re-read some of what you wrote and correct it.
| Tsukishima100 chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Your're first problem...naming the Rider Eternal. Seriously dude there already is an Eternal, don't mean to sound like a pest cause I'm sure you've already heard this time and time before but change his damn name. Why not just rewrite this so his name is the same as your pen name. It would help make a little more sence.
| Kisdota-The Freak Gamer chapter 2 . 12/5/2010
LOOK I THINK THE PROBLEM WITH THE VOTING IS THAT THE TRAFFIC IS LOW, THE ONLY ONES REVIEWING ARE THE ONES WHO GAVE YOU THE OC RIDERS, SO THEY'RE THE ONLY ONES THAT'LL VOTE. AND EVERYONE'S JUST GOING TO VOTE FOR THEIR'S, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
| piplupm chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
ok i made 1 but havnt got around to making him, kamen rider tyranno hes partners with a little red t rex and when hes wants to henshin he says tyranno belt mode and transforms into the belt and he says henshin and the belt rawrs he looks like the mmpr red ranger but with red and silver armor the belt is a gun and a sword too
| starofjustice chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Having read this introductory chapter, my main advice would be to slow down. I was able to get practically no sense of the characters or what's going on, and I agree you seem to be heavily presupposing familiarity with KR Decade. Which I have, but being as that's kind of a chaotic show you should probably put more effort into explaining what this is all about.
Perhaps a bit more detail on the combat as well, but broken into smaller paragraphs.
| Shuriken16 chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
I feel the same as he does, unless people watched Decade, they won't get what's going on. it went too fast, barely any character development, it just felt too random. and a lot of people might get confused with Eternal's name, as there is already an Eternal; but that's just my opinion