|Reviews for A Second Chance|
| jeoliverio chapter 32 . 2/6
This is a good story
| orchidluv chapter 32 . 1/28
I hope there's a sequel!
| orchidluv chapter 29 . 1/28
*stared* not *starred* when meaning looking at someone for a long time.
| Paul'sWolfGirl2016 chapter 32 . 12/31/2016
Have you ever thought about doing a sequel to this story
| Paul'sWolfGirl2016 chapter 28 . 12/31/2016
My mum left me and my younger sister. She left to be in a relationship with a man who didn't want to share her with her family. That kind of pain, hurt, betrayal, disappointment doesn't ever go away. Even if or when that person comes back, you don't truly ever forgive them for the pain they caused you. I never liked the way SM wrote Bella as this forgive full person. Especially when Edward and the family left her. My mum came back, only to leave again a further six times always for the same man. I am now grown up with my own home, but because of the damage she caused I have my younger sister living with me. Because my younger sister wants contact I see my mum but if my sister wasn't here. I would want nothing to do with my mum. You can't forgive someone especially those who claim to be family and love you for leaving, because that pain will always be there. I know you've written more since this chapter but I just had to put this up
| USNeshama chapter 32 . 12/30/2016
Really compelling, and very well written.
| monay9e chapter 14 . 11/26/2016
This is Bull****! How can she forgive them so quickly. And I bet they want her to love poor Edward!
| ElianaValdez-DaughterofHermes chapter 17 . 11/18/2016
If an erection is caused by blood rushing into the penis... then how does a vampire get an erection?
| MaximumRider21 chapter 5 . 11/3/2016
NOOO! NOT JALICE!
| Kushka chapter 32 . 8/21/2016
| M.S.Carol chapter 32 . 7/23/2016
a little sad tone of an ending but the good part is that she's with her mate and they will eventually have some type of relationship.
There's a lot to heal from and I hope Edward learns from his mistakes as well as Alice and the others.
| M.S.Carol chapter 31 . 7/23/2016
that is always something I questioned...she had bled so much and Jasper had been fine but one drop of blood and he had gone into a blood lust rage.
| M.S.Carol chapter 30 . 7/23/2016
oh boy. here we go.
I mean i know that in our minds she has moved on.
But for Edward he still "loves" her so I am sure he's going through quite some right now.
| M.S.Carol chapter 29 . 7/23/2016
finally the shfit...full acceptance of being his mate.(sigh)
| M.S.Carol chapter 28 . 7/23/2016
i'm glad she's going through all this...this needs to be cleared up before she can move forward.