Reviews for One Day of Relaxing Sin
lowi chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Aww, I liked this so much, mew!

Vicnev truly is a perfect pairing, I've said it and I'll say it again! ;3

"Feel my lips graze that swan-white neck,

&& your hope flares back to

Life"

Beautiful! &hearts
lonely hands chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Oh, like it? I LOVE it, mew! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!

'& the cheer starts fading,

the hope starts burning,

your stomach starts churning—

&& you come home to

m e'

That verse in particular sent shivers down my spine It was beautifully structured - it just flows so well and almost seemed quite haunting, in the most delightful way :o

You are amazing, FACT.
jojor99 chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
I really love all of your freeverse. They are very well done. Even more so as I can not imagine even contemplating writing one myself, let alone a good one.
HarryPotterResidentEvilFan chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Love it! Good job, dear! :D

The end is my favorite. :)