|Reviews for One Day of Relaxing Sin|
| lowi chapter 1 . 8/22/2011
Aww, I liked this so much, mew!
Vicnev truly is a perfect pairing, I've said it and I'll say it again! ;3
"Feel my lips graze that swan-white neck,
&& your hope flares back to
| lonely hands chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Oh, like it? I LOVE it, mew! THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!
'& the cheer starts fading,
the hope starts burning,
your stomach starts churning—
&& you come home to
That verse in particular sent shivers down my spine It was beautifully structured - it just flows so well and almost seemed quite haunting, in the most delightful way :o
You are amazing, FACT.
| jojor99 chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
I really love all of your freeverse. They are very well done. Even more so as I can not imagine even contemplating writing one myself, let alone a good one.
| macdennischardee chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Love it! Good job, dear! :D
The end is my favorite. :)