Reviews for Enchanted Beginnings
SkullAuror107 chapter 2 . 11/14/2010
What luck. Just missing Sho like that. I wonder if they're on good terms or if he's still an ass when they see each other.

Kanae is an excellent manipulator. She knows just how to work Kyoko over. I look forward to Maria's part.

Also...I think I may be on to something with my line of thinking.
SkullAuror107 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Yay, you wrote another story!

The idea of this scavenger hunt is fun. I wonder what the purpose behind it is. And if Ren is in on it. OMG...I just thought of a good possibility of what it's for. I'll keep it to myself though until I read more. :)

I love that Kyoko and Ren are already together. And that he isn't hesitant about showing her his feelings.

Your husband did a great job with the poems/clues. Poor Sawara-san. He's probably still nervous about getting on Kyoko's bad side. Especially after that hell she put him through.
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