Reviews for Revival
angel060689 chapter 20 . 9/15
i like this story.
it turns around much, but that made the story in no way predictabel.
do you continue?

nighty.amy chapter 20 . 7/9/2014
Waaaah, when will you update? I'm dying to know if the spell on Soubi can be broken! And if he regain his memories. And if Seimei will get killed finally. It's not nice to keep readers at the edge of their seats for too long, you know?
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 20 . 3/29/2014
Please continue this story, it's amazing, and I would love to find out what Soubi was doing in his lab and if he gets his memories back!

I've read quite a few of your stories, and I love them all. You truly have talent at writing. :D
TheHiddenAngel chapter 20 . 2/23/2013
i like the story so far keep at it
Guest chapter 20 . 10/13/2012
Writemore writemore writemore!

I almost didn't read this because frankly the premise didn't sound very promising to me. But I'm so glad I did. This is some really, really good work.

Writemore writemore writemore!
Emotive Gothika chapter 20 . 8/29/2012
OMG I read this whole thing in one sitting and I am crying and squeeing and begging for an update! I wanna know what happens! QAQ
ChibiSeme97 chapter 20 . 8/17/2012
PLEASE! LET ME KNOW WHAT HAPPENS! I MUST KNOW! I LOVE THIS TORY AND MUST KNOW! *cries and holds on to your leg like a little kid* Pleaaaaaaaaseeee! DXXXX
Bocchan832 chapter 20 . 7/29/2012
Omg this is so amazing , Ive been reading this all day and yesterday!
I really do hope you update again soooon!
AZ1087653 chapter 20 . 12/22/2011
This is a great story and I really hope you continue with the plot.
ash chapter 20 . 9/25/2011
DreamReap chapter 20 . 9/19/2011
Woah.. this is scary D:

Soubi is kind of funny to see acting like a child but it's pretty hard to imagine (though your writing makes that possible)

It's so hard on Ritsuka for all this to happen but despite that he still is happy just because he can live with Soubi and Kio.

I'm glad Ritsuka still loves Soubi, cause I always wondered how that would work if it happened to Ritsuka.

It was so freaky when Ritsuka went into Soubi's memory's, seeing the Ritsu scenes made me be "oh no oh no no!"

I like how throughout your different stories you've changed Kiyoshi and Seimei to fit.

My favorited are the lovey scenes especially the flash backs to when Soubi was okay and the cuddling :3

I really hope you update this soon!
Broken Sexed Up Bloody Kitten chapter 20 . 8/20/2011
I absolutely loved this. One of the best Loveless stories around. Please keep writing!

I can't wait for more!
CherryBlossom-Okami chapter 20 . 8/14/2011
First things first, I would like to say that I absolutely love this story and really hope that you complete it soon. _ I'm not going to lie, I actually stayed up till six o'clock in the morning reading Revival. It's like an addicting novel that you just can't put down until it's finished!

You have a vivid writing style with plenty of detail, yet still easily understandable by the reader. I love how you go in depth into Ritsuka's feelings and devotion towards Soubi, as well as Kio and Ritsu.

I don't think I really have anything that you would need to improve on as a writer, either. The only problem I have ever had when it comes to reading your work is the occasional confusion concerning characters actions, but that's not really much.

If anything, just keep up the amazing work and please update soon! _

Take care.
Pie Shaped Cumulus chapter 20 . 8/6/2011
Oooooh please update? Please please please, like, really soon!...


Anywho, I really love this story (I've just recently started reading Loveless fics and I have to say this sure is a good way to start off), and I'm sorry this is such a lame ass review but I'm so tired right now... _
Erihppas chapter 20 . 7/30/2011
I am happy to have found your fics. :3

Hurt/Comfort fic is a guilty pleasure of mine, especially when the 'stronger' one is hurt~ Plus, I always enjoyed reading fics with Ritsuka being strong for Soubi even though he has such a woobie past and all.

It's been a long while I read Loveless, so I can't remember the story and its characters well save the mains... but I do like how Ritsu actually regretted the incident, and how Seimei actually cares for Ritsuka enough to give up on what he'd intend to do.

Skimming your profile, I see you've written loads of fics and completed some of them. I do hope to see this fic updated and complete in the future. :3
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