Reviews for Harry Potter and the Elder Mistake
stealacandy chapter 9 . 7/13
Hi,

Olivander keeps talking about an ancestor of Penn.

I'm petty sure he mean a descendent?
thedude19859 chapter 44 . 5/15
good story
Guest chapter 22 . 2/26
Great story so far bout half way through at the moment can't wait to read the rest
Monzanita chapter 44 . 11/13/2015
Hi, I'm new to this site but loved your story and can't wait for more. I'm not sure when you posted that you needed a beta if you do I can check spelling and grammar if you still need someone- anything to see more of this story :)
Guest chapter 37 . 11/12/2015
I had to comment before I even read this chapter. You are an amazing writer. There's nothing about your story telling I don't like, everything is believable. I do have to kinda skim the gushy parts sometimes, but I know other people love them. The only thing I wish there was more of (and I really do mean this as a compliment- I love your writing so I want more of it type thing) is more interaction between the golden trio like there was in the books. I know Harry would spend alot of time with Ginny but I hoped he would take more time with his friends too. But that's just me and I'm not going to complain about it- I am happy to have more Harry Potter that extends the story in a great way! Thank you for all of your writing and for making it free for me to read :) you really are great!
Guest chapter 20 . 11/10/2015
I love this book so far, I have loved every bit and it makes me so happy to have another Harry Potter to read. I don't know what else to say but I really am happy you've written this!
Merely Observing chapter 15 . 10/17/2015
6yyykhhhf
Leander-the-Hawk chapter 44 . 10/12/2015
I have enjoyed this story immensely. Thank you very much for taking the time to write it, and I look forward to anything else you put onto the site
lovemya2000 chapter 23 . 9/16/2015
You Are Awesome. No One Else Has Been Able To Incorpurate Lost Blacks Even Though They Are Evil. That Scene Was So Shocking. And It Would Have Been Nice If Some Family Would Have Helped Sirius. And Bringing Voldemort Back Using The Stone. WOW. You Take So Many Fresh Ideas And Use Them Well
Guest chapter 43 . 9/15/2015
Absolutely awesome. I have a BA honors degree in creative and professional writing and i just want you to know that if you have the imagination to come up with a story and the courage to put it out there, then just that alone deserves praise. But this story is really enjoyable. It flows lovely and has tones of potential. You may have got some words jumbled and some gramma mistakes but that just shows how eager you were to write it because your mind was overflowing with creativity. As to the gramma? Well did you know that some of the worlds best creative minds can't do simple gramma... btw if you need a beta for the next story let me know can't wait for the sequal xxx
Alisha chapter 17 . 9/14/2015
I've Always Wanted To Read Something That Acknowledged The Other Blacks That Were Blasted Off And Whatever Happened To Their Families. Well Done. My Mouth Was Wide Open In Glee And Awe. Also If Alphard Was A Blood Traitor For Leaving Money To Sirius Why Is His Child So Hateful
Alisha chapter 13 . 9/10/2015
Good Chapter. It Must Suck Having A Sibling 20 Years Younger Than You
Alisha chapter 8 . 9/9/2015
What A Sad Letter. Harry Is So Great
violetsdream chapter 43 . 8/2/2015
I just finished your story, and grammatical and spelling errors aside, you managed to create a very plausible further adventures of Harry and company. Harry's inner voice was spot on, the interactions were well done, and all in all, an extremely good effort on your part. I spent the last four nights reading the whole story, and I really hope that you will continue. This story is too good to not write the sequel. Thanks for sharing.
Madeye chapter 43 . 7/25/2015
Really really good. Would love a sequel ️️
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