|Reviews for If It Weren't For You Meddling Kids|
| Ashen Author chapter 1 . 1/23
This was hilarious, especially the comment at the end
| Lord-Sylph chapter 1 . 1/15
I totally thought it was an AU at first, right up until Nanoha pulled summoned Raising Heart
| Pokemonever1994 chapter 1 . 6/27/2015
I wondered whether that was a 'normal girls' AU at the start with them as the Scooby Doo cast honestly said, but where do people get the idea that Suzuka is a vampire anyway?
But I must agree with Arisa, that guy was a real idiot that he couldn't guess that! I mean, two 'witches', one cloned alien witch (!), a vampire and a 'Werewolf', or rather a 'witches' familiar. And he didn't get it the whole time! Hasn't understood probably even by the end of it but Vivio has a good point in that Omake as well.
| Duncan0Idaho chapter 1 . 5/19/2014
"Then, if you bit a dog, could it turn into a person?"
Bwahaha, oh god man, that was perfect!, oh god that line actually laugh out loud quite a bit!
| Sunder the Gold chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
"he can't even tell when he's eating dinner with two witches, an alien clone, a vampire, and a werewolf?"
Haha, oh wow!
That IS what makes it different from Scooby-Doo. For, once, there WAS something explicitly supernatural. But it was the kids instead of the mystery!
And no, I was pretty much expecting the fireworks.
| ZonaRose chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
LOL and ROTF! That was great. I would like to see more like this one. Bring it on I love a good mystery!
| Honulicious chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
haaa i don't know how i missed this ;P it was really cool and fun to read! the omake was great too ;p
| MissGardenia chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Hehe, this was cute. I guess this takes place before Arisa gets ghosted? Still, it was nice to at least see Suzuka get to do something. (And Hayate! She got to cast a spell in combat! And it did something! Wooooooooow.)
The only thing I will say is that given Fate is the Enforcer here, it would've seemed slightly more coherent to have her be leading the investigation instead of the White Devil. ;X
| Logan not here chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
This was great! I did think it was AU for a moment there, but when it got to the part where Nanoha was so persistent about negotiating with the 'tengu,' I started to get the feeling that it was going somewhere else. And sure enough :D
This was a great read! Now I almost want to go back and read Blood and Spirit again just because Arisa and Suzuka are so awesome.
| Gundum M chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
| d chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
ahaha vivio's so cute! and i did actually think this was an AU until they transform which was a nice shock. this was great, i always love your works.
| Baughn chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Sorry. You'd need to insert some actual 'evidence' of them being normals for that to work. :P
I must admit I was surprised by the vampire, though. That's not usually in this universe.
| Sumiregawa Nenene chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Ahaha. Oh dear. This was awesome.
I totally felt like I was in a Scooby Doo cartoon all over again. The only thing I could've asked for a bit more of would be some Fate and Arf running-around-scared hijinks. XD
And the ending lines? CLASSIC funny.
*waits for other things you come up with, as a paitently adoring fan*
| armoredishamael chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
you keep writing these stories and now I can't stop smiling
| shanejayell chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
AWWW. So cute! _ Poor Fate. *pats*