|Reviews for If It Weren't For You Meddling Kids|
| Sunder the Gold chapter 1 . 2/10/2011
"he can't even tell when he's eating dinner with two witches, an alien clone, a vampire, and a werewolf?"
Haha, oh wow!
That IS what makes it different from Scooby-Doo. For, once, there WAS something explicitly supernatural. But it was the kids instead of the mystery!
And no, I was pretty much expecting the fireworks.
| ZonaRose chapter 1 . 11/29/2010
LOL and ROTF! That was great. I would like to see more like this one. Bring it on I love a good mystery!
| Honulicious chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
haaa i don't know how i missed this ;P it was really cool and fun to read! the omake was great too ;p
| MissGardenia chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Hehe, this was cute. I guess this takes place before Arisa gets ghosted? Still, it was nice to at least see Suzuka get to do something. (And Hayate! She got to cast a spell in combat! And it did something! Wooooooooow.)
The only thing I will say is that given Fate is the Enforcer here, it would've seemed slightly more coherent to have her be leading the investigation instead of the White Devil. ;X
| Logan not here chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
This was great! I did think it was AU for a moment there, but when it got to the part where Nanoha was so persistent about negotiating with the 'tengu,' I started to get the feeling that it was going somewhere else. And sure enough :D
This was a great read! Now I almost want to go back and read Blood and Spirit again just because Arisa and Suzuka are so awesome.
| Gundum M chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
| d chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
ahaha vivio's so cute! and i did actually think this was an AU until they transform which was a nice shock. this was great, i always love your works.
| Baughn chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Sorry. You'd need to insert some actual 'evidence' of them being normals for that to work. :P
I must admit I was surprised by the vampire, though. That's not usually in this universe.
| Sumiregawa Nenene chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Ahaha. Oh dear. This was awesome.
I totally felt like I was in a Scooby Doo cartoon all over again. The only thing I could've asked for a bit more of would be some Fate and Arf running-around-scared hijinks. XD
And the ending lines? CLASSIC funny.
*waits for other things you come up with, as a paitently adoring fan*
| armoredishamael chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
you keep writing these stories and now I can't stop smiling
| shanejayell chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
AWWW. So cute! _ Poor Fate. *pats*
| GeshronTyler chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Hah! Just this weekend I'd returned to peruse the Animesuki MSLN forums after a several months hiatus, and came upon your Scooby!MSLN fic, and was thinking I ought to poke you about posting this little gem on FFnet. ) I'd expected N,F,H to be mages from the beginning (because, you know, evildoers would have even less of a chance P), but I'd wondered if Suzuka was going to be a vampire, and Arisa a ghost. Which, it turns out, they were. _ An amusing piece, to be sure.
I grew up with Scooby Doo, unfortunately, my parents didn't approve of cartoons, so I was forced to snatch what opportunities to watch them when I could, weekday afternoons, and Saturday mornings (and summer break mornings- Star Blazers!Robotech! P). I do recall that I _never_ managed to see all 2? parts of "Winds of Winnona (sp?)". Curse my parents and their insistance on "educational" TV. Though they basically approved of the Muppet Show, since that had enough draw for the adults as well. _
| ByLanternLight chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Scooby-ooby-doo! 5/5. A fun little homage.
| Eleventh Messenger chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Cackle. That was rather entertaining.
I'm glad to see you pulling from your 'Blood and Spirit' continuity, I'd love to see more of your versions of the characters.
| Solarius Scorch chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
Excellent work, as always. True, initially I was a bit sceptical about Fate acting scared while carrying an equivalent of a small artillery unit around, but it worked very well in the end.