Wonderful story, very moving, I felt many emotions. :)

Such a great story!

This is nearly exactly what I thought! But of the episode Darkness and Light instead of this one. Great minds think alike ;) It makes a lot of sense with Gillian's character.

SorryIi have taken soooooo long to finish this story. I kind of gave up on Lie to Me for a bit but started watching a few episodes on Netflix so decided to clean up all the story alerts I still had sitting in my email!
Very sweet ending!

this was a great story! i loved when gill and cal had the same thoughts at the same times, but always just a tad bit different; it always made me smile!

God. I miss Lie to Me.
Lovely story, dear.

Loved it. :):)

So glad you added an epilogue. And don't worry, I absolutely understand that you feel more comfortable writing about how their relationship builds up than about the relationship itself, but this chapter had just the right amount of showing where they are going while at the same time not showing too much and leaving the rest to our fantasy. That's the way I like it. Greetings to your muse - she did a good job! ;)

And for some reason, this is my favorite line: "I'm not reading this wrong, am I Gill?" I can practically hear Cal say it.

This was such a great fic. Loved Cal in this one and also how Gillian is vulnerable yet strong. I liked the way you ended it because I wanted that acknowledgement. Great writing! You write Cal and Gillian so well!

Excellent, another great story and a sweet ending.

Thank's for posting. ;)

It was lovely to read this little end of story/beginning of everything else. :) So sweet and tender.

That was a perfect easy to wrap it up!

This story was awesome. It caught my eye and I just couldn't put it down. Thank you so much for writing it! I am super addicted to this show and it's so nice to find great fanfiction to read. I look forward to the sequal even though leaving it like this would not bother me in the slightest. Thanks again. -

I loved every bit of this. Yes it was heavy and a bit dark at times, but you handled the subject as gracefully yet honestly as possible. Also like that you brought them right up to, but not past, that 'line' - it wouldn't have been the right time but was a great start. If love to see an epilogue or even a sequel if inspiration strikes.

I love this story...great job!