Reviews for Like the Light in Your Angel Eyes
bronzed topaz chapter 1 . 9/15/2011
That's a much better New Moon. I could think of a whole lot to put in New Moon AND still sticking to the Eclipse book. Now there's a thought...

Anyway, getting sidetracked, that was great, I loved it and New Moon should have totally been written like this. They needed him to leave her, but not for nearly as long as he did and she so did not need to 'fall in love' with Jacob. Ok, so maybe I would rewrite Eclipse as well... sue me.

Great job!

PS: I read this over at the contest page.
KimiD chapter 1 . 5/8/2011
SL~ NICELY DONE...! This was awesome, I really enjoy your writing and this was totally great! Well written, smooth and again, awesome. I loved the part where the "Voice" was yelling at him to "Go Back" and he closer he got to Forks it was as though he was feeling exactly what Bella was going through with him gone. I really liked the part too where when Bella went into her room and locked the door. I could "see" in my mind's eye the look on her face...she thought she was hallucinating! That she had lost her mind because of losing him. That was nicely done. The whole o/s had me on pins and needles cuz I never know what you're going to do and as he was getting closer I was afraid maybe she had tried to commit suicide (a twist in the story) but you kept to the original and just put the twist on him not being able to leave her after all. Great writing, Love it!
mountainlion718 chapter 1 . 1/31/2011
good one shot, that's what he should have done in the book! then there would have been no damn Jacob!
pointlessunusedaccount chapter 1 . 12/2/2010
absolutely beautiful, i feel right at home :) 3
Juiliette chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I liked it. A lot better then some others I have read that have a similar plot (no offense to anyone). I love twilight. :)
sscana chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
I'm so happy you wrote Edward pulling his head out and realizing what a mistake he made. He realized he needed her more than anything. I really liked him in her room. Seeing how bad she really looked. Him explaining why he left and what a mistake it was to leave her. How he realized she is his world and that he'd do anything for her if she'd forgive him. Loved the ending. Bella telling him welcome home.
NewTownGirl chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
Wow, just happened upon this and it is brilliant! Absoloutely loved it, I think you really got into Edward as a character - I kind of wish the books had gone this way instead. Wonderful :)
ange de l'aube chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
This was one of the parts of the Saga I struggled the most. I just couldn't fathom how Edward - with how much he loved Bella - was able to stay away for so long... It just didn't make sense to me. But I guess SM forced things here so that the dreaded Jacob/Bella/Edward triangle could be born...

Thank you for making things right in this O/S...

My E, the E I read on those books would have come back...

Great O/S I really hope you win something. You deserved it.

Good Luck on Saturday! *crosses fingers*