Reviews for Grounded Lily's Red Freckled Bottom 1
kagome higurashi chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
please write some more. is the male dean or somebody else from lily's past?
Okay Oblivious chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
I know you haven't updated in almost a year, but I would like to know who the voice was. So please update if you ever get the chance.
Party-Shoes16 chapter 1 . 5/10/2011
I liked your story.

There were only a few confusions were she was 18 at the beginning of the story, but 19 later on.

Also you already mentioned her panties were on the floor, so how could they later be around her knees?

Exposing the tampon was a good touch, and you had great descriptions.

Please let me know when you update. I hope it's sometime soon.
CTgirl14 chapter 1 . 12/23/2010
please update soon
wandamarie chapter 1 . 11/16/2010
it was a good one i had always thought she need her bottom spanked it was a good one thanks