Reviews for Promises, Promises
tkim619 chapter 1 . 6/27/2014
wow! passionate much tomoyo!
Marisa chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
To be totally honest, I could totally see this going down between Tomoyo and Eriol.


So for me, this wasn't out of character. If I remember correctly, they were in like, what, elementary school when they first met?

Pshhh with age comes maturity!

Err, something like that.

LOL anyways - Tomoyo always did seem like the sweet, I'm-actually-a-total-sex-goddess-really-cynical-kind-of-girl to her as a double facade. Excellently written.

I do love all the dialogue. xD Amusing, very amusing! Ha ha :3
devilzAngel chapter 1 . 1/3/2009
I haven't read such good stuff in a long time...! man u had me der!

tomoyoz a naughty gal... _~
Jacal Ste. Worme chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
Sexy! A sequel calls! XD Great job!
PRNGS chapter 1 . 6/15/2007
ahaha, love it!
Emerald Panther chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
lol! i love this one. i feel sorta bad for kaho but oh well. i never thought that she and eriol would go well together.
OriginalBubble chapter 1 . 5/5/2007
wel done!
Tomoyo-tenshi chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Oh my God... I absolutely looved it! Gorgeously written. Good Job!
Seductive Venus chapter 1 . 8/30/2006
*Aya is stunned*

That is probably the most riveting and beautiful and sad and bittersweet... and I've got an arsenal of adjectives, if I will continue. Anyway. Your fic is very descriptive, exciting, arousing, and very realistic. There I go again. I go all prose-y and spouts adj. at every turn. YOur fic is dark and angsty and truly exciting! I love it! Mind if i add it? I'm not as good at writing this as you are. I've tried but I i haven't produced something as lovely as this. it reminds me of after the fall by kit spooner. and i'll check lie to me. Keep up the good work, chelle-sama! _
Reiyuka chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
It's both icky and brilliant. Not a lot of people write about this sort of thing - especially not in the manner that you did - the pure, brutal, animal attraction as you might call it. Usually people pretty it up, but sometimes sex is just sex, not making love.

Even though I shuddered a lot at times and felt a bit stunned, I must say that it's a good story nonetheless.
Sasaya chapter 1 . 4/10/2004
I liked the story, and that little skit at the end is PRICELESS!
LoL Yes, Eriol is a sick, sick man... LoL
Dana Daidouji chapter 1 . 3/1/2003
_ Wow!. me likes it. A shame they don't end up together as a couple. Loves Tomoyo's 'dark' side *lolz* I think it's very well written.
Gaby-chan chapter 1 . 10/30/2002
I like it. it was different. You should do more lemon stories for mature readers like us. I am 24 also. I had an fiction nc-17 but got erased. That really suck because they were great stories out there and should known that there are growup fans. Although there were quite a few that were kind of unsexy and childish (stupid 13teens with hormones). The last part in your author notes was funny. I just imaging eriol explaining a furious kaho and a sweet almost naked tomoyo trying to make it better
Silverwing chapter 1 . 10/15/2002
Nice story... Plz continue it's really good and it won't hurt to post up another capter will it ?

PLZZZZZ continue this story

Kit Spooner chapter 1 . 5/28/2002
Surprise, surprise: I like this. I tend to like the darker portrayals of Tomoyo, particularly when added to the darker, more elemental aspects of Eriol. They're both very sensual characters, even in the manga/anime when they're still children. I wouldn't call this porn either, actually. The focus of the story isn't on the act of sex, it's about power and relationships and all the little complexities that make real life so fascinating. So overall, good job!
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