Reviews for Larmes
RandomnessQueen1 chapter 2 . 2/26/2012
Wow! This is good! I'm American and trying to learn French, so this was great practice for me. The story is moving quite quickly, but it's good. Are you planning on continuing it? Please do!
Angedelanuit101 chapter 1 . 10/2/2011

C'est plutôt impressionnant pour une première fanfiction en français... Même s'il reste des fautes, c'est facile à lire et l'histoire a l'air bien!

Juste un conseil : en français, dans un texte, on écrit toujours à l'indicatif passé simple ou à l'indicatif imparfait, jamais à l'indicatif passé composé. :)

Bonne continuation!
Juniko chapter 1 . 12/18/2010
I'm french and I reguraly write in English, so I can easily put myself in your shoes and I have to say : for a first french story, that's awesome. I mean, it's not perfect (far from it), but I know how illogical and difficult my language can be and I right now, I'm a little impressed.

Are you sure it's your first french fiction?

Anyway, I will write a Criminal Mind story in french and english, so please review it when it's out. Since you know what it's like to write in another language.