|Reviews for With all that's within you|
| LouiseKurylo chapter 1 . 5/4/2015
This is excellent. You chart the emotional topography of their relationship and the serial killer situation with fine insight and sensitivity. Lovely. Thank you.
| csiAngel chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
This is lovely. It's so very them. Excellent writing.
| Lothiriel84 chapter 1 . 5/10/2012
Loved it! Such a touching story, and beautifully written!
It's so sweet that Jane decides to sleep in his car parked near Lisbon's house...
| ShadowBallad chapter 1 . 10/25/2011
Loved this to pieces! Their characterisations were spot on throughout. I especially enjoyed that it was all from Lisbon's perspective. I know that sounds lame - I loved the point of view most, haha? - but really, it just worked, to have Jane be the Other, the Unknowable, and relate Lisbon's worryings and befuddled feelings for him. It was a nice touch. :)
Very nice ending too! :) So much UST it was almost unbearable, haha. :) Though of course I wasn't expecting any kisses, it was very romantic even without one.
| Syd15 chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
Oh my! You might have seen a pattern in my reading of your stories (I'm going for the M rated ones first, hey, I did say I love sexy times. Bonus points, remember?) but I saw this one rated T but dealing with episode 3x08 and I had to read it talready. I loved the episode, and really, I loved it more about what we saw of Lisbon than Jane...
When she said the bit about how if it was red john again then he was coming back I felt my heart break right then and there! And I didn't have anyone to comment the episode with at the time because my sister was a little behind...
I loved how you wrote Lisbon in this fic, it's so HER. It was so obvious through the whole episode how scared she was for his well being... And I understand her, after he took him already once, how can they be sure that he won't take him tomorrow? They just can't.
This guy is really scary, he has someone everywhere... I have this theory that he has to be some kind of mentalist himself... All these people kiling at his will, covering for him, willing to die for him... I don't know it seems kind of weird...
Oh, on another note...
i"For what it's worth, I want you to know that at some point in that basement, I... I decided that I wasn't ready to die yet…and it had nothing to do with Red John."/i
Auch, I loved it. He's saying SO much without actually saying anything...
| Aquila1 chapter 1 . 12/30/2010
I finally remembered to put you on author alert after all this time. That way, I won't miss when you post gems like this. Nicely done. I love how you managed to move them forward without actually resolving anything. I enjoyed it very much.
Happy new year!
| tromana chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I don't know why, but this is one of my favourite fics of yours ever. Well worth waiting until the UK broadcast for it.
| LSR-7 chapter 1 . 12/4/2010
Another excellent story, though I thought it was the beginning of something epic and was rather disappointed to get to the end to see that it was the end with no chapters to follow *hint hint*. Oh well, life is full of disappointments lol.
| ten10 chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
this story was amazing. very true to character. thanks :)
| a testament to improvement chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
Wow. Usually when I favorite stuff, It's kind of like a bookmark, so I can go back and reread it without forgetting the title. In this case, you've made a list of actual favorite stories. I mean, wow. That was really really good. Really. I think I'm going to go back and read it one more time. Definitely checking out your other stuff. :)
| Alexia77 chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
This is a really wonderful story! I loved the way Lisbon and Jane interact, it felt really personal and authentic, as well as true to their individual characters. You made my night for writing it, thank you!
| LunaLove chapter 1 . 11/22/2010
Oh, I think I'm addicted to your stories. Or at the very least the *feel* of them. You manage to create such an intense undercurrent of UST that totally blows me away. I will now go and read some more from you - although I should be working on my exam... (Bah, it can wait)
| boutondor chapter 1 . 11/21/2010
Loved it :) The ending was perfect. This was a fantastic tag to the episode. Good job, as always :)
| glouton-mana chapter 1 . 11/20/2010
I like how characters are analysed.
| Anna chapter 1 . 11/20/2010