Reviews for To Die at Your Lips II
Shiori Yomu chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
So bittersweet...But at least Vanitas is peaceful now. :)
KagomeAngel91 chapter 1 . 10/23/2012
Teagarden chapter 1 . 12/9/2011
Very interesting fic. I love how you ended it, it was such a perfect ending.
GreyVenom chapter 1 . 7/23/2011
not bad. it was i think it should have multi-chaptered. but did vanitas die or something? what happened to him?
Unkown cherry girl chapter 1 . 5/7/2011
Oh my god love both to die at your lips stories they're fantastic! Love them keep it up
xXPrincessMXx chapter 1 . 5/6/2011
And again, you left me with no words... It was sweet... not so darkly... hmm...

Sadly sweet?

Nah, I'll go for touching. The story was touching...

My compliments, once again ;)
Radiant Silver Star chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Oh, wow.

I am a diehard goodie-two-shoes when it comes to reading. No one has ever been able to make me actually feel for a "bad guy." No one. Ever.

At least, not until now.

Completely unexpected.

Completely surprising.

Completely unsettling.

Completely amazing.

Keep writing!

aestheticisms chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Beautiful, amazing, absolutely amazing. Honestly, this was a fantastic conclusion to the tale - I loved the heartbreaking ending, and how in the end, he did fulfill his side of the deal. He disappeared, and...just wow.

You're an amazing writer, you know.

aradian nights chapter 1 . 2/27/2011
... *Scrambles for words*

BadabaWAH? O.O

It made my throat close up. That's impressive enough as it is. *Completely heartless*

I'd complain about the cheese in the first one, but, uh, it was actually really well done. It didn't obscure my vision (like it does when I write), and it was completely bearable. Yummy, even.

This one had me speechless for a few minutes (minutes I don't have, because I have to get back to watching the Oscars). I kind of tried to digest what had happened before thinking about it. Um, so the ending impressed me. It was one of those things that I could see coming, but still left me baffled. I mean, usually I get annoyed with things that I see coming (or in the case of horror, I laugh at them), but there are strange and amazing cases where I can just smile, or be awed. Or both. I wasn't smiling at the end of this though. It was too... sad. Hmph. Not completely heartless.

The ending was definitely the best part, and I praise you for it. Really, I love the idea of that kind of kiss. I've always liked it. Even when I was younger, and I watched a show called Charmed where those kind of kisses happened in nearly every episode. So, really, amazing job. Aqua's crying was just the cherry on top of the most delicious one shot I've read since Divine Wolfe was still writing KH.

Thank you.

(I'm getting better at leaving reviews. O.O Hmmm...)
prospiitian chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
That was... so sad ;~;
Ice Princezz chapter 1 . 1/23/2011
Omg this made me fucking cry like a baby... TT-TT but a good story any way
TeeHunter13 chapter 1 . 12/24/2010
is the best story of yours I ve ever read.
we-are-not-soldiers chapter 1 . 12/20/2010
This little mini-series was beautiful. You really made people feel for the bad guy, which is something that doesn't happen very often. Great job!

-alex! 3
Enlyien chapter 1 . 12/8/2010

That was really... wow...

I seriously love these two together.

I'm in love with how you linked his Lingering Sentiment with this..

PracticalDreamer chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
if thats not depressing I don't know what is. poor vanitas..);
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