|Reviews for Black Sand|
| Aries01xD chapter 24 . 5/21
I'm just going to say it
I like Amun
His intentions may not always be crystal clear but I think he was very genuine with Nakia in this chapter. I think all the mystery that surrounds his character is what makes him so interesting
I'm happy he left Nakia with a hopeful message. I do believe she doesn't know how strong she is, so it could be interesting to see her develop her skills in the future.
I loved loved the chapter. Thank you for updating! It is always a pleasure diving into this amazing story of yours.
| SpeechBubbleMe chapter 24 . 5/15
Egyptian gods are so picky about their worship! I'm really interested in Amun and I hope he shows up later in the story. I'm not sure if he's benevolent or not, but I guess that's his nature - advice can be good or bad, depending on the situation. Great chapter!
| Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 24 . 5/14
I hope when Nun is found; he gets a godlike slap to the back of his head...
| Anon 13 chapter 24 . 5/14
Yaay u updated! The one about Anubjs killing himslef kinda scares me but i like that we can think that Amun is on Nakias side. Good job and keep going
| ElementalFoxGoddess chapter 7 . 3/25
I know this is probably not going to happen, but I'm shipping Anubis/Nakia/Amun right now...and I def know this is no Sadie Kane kind of fic. I just love pairing Gods/mortals or seeminginly mortals together!
| Miya chapter 23 . 2/2
I've been following this fic for awhile, and I'm determined to see it through the end because it's THAT good. Thanks for the update, and keep up the good work!
| Aries01xD chapter 23 . 2/1
Well, she kinda of followed Amun's advice about jumping into the river.
I feel like Jordan was totally flirting with her. I can't blame Nakia for enjoying his company though. Anubis hasn't been the most fun to be around lately. I continue to hope that the next emotion he gets back is a positive one.
I guess I'll just have to patiently wait for the next update now (this will be tough).
Thank you for posting two chapters!
| Aries01xD chapter 22 . 2/1
You updated! :)
You have no idea how much joy I get from reading your story.
I was really happy to see they were headed to Egypt! I know that something interesting will happen in this new arc (I am mean c'mon it's Egypt!).
| Anon 13 chapter 23 . 2/1
Nakia likeing the band of someone who Anubis doesnt like? Yikes! Update sooon : ))
| Anon 13 chapter 22 . 2/1
Yay you updated! I love Osiris hes prty cool! And your writing style and the story line get better with each chapter!
| SpeechBubbleMe chapter 23 . 1/31
Great set of chapters! To be honest I had to refresh my memory a bit after so long between updates, but that just means I get to read more! Update again soon :)
| Puffgirl1952 the 2nd chapter 23 . 1/31
Read both new chapters and they are very good...
I can see this story being posted on FictionPress, Figment, Spark a Tale, Wattpad and Quetev; this would be a hit on the other sites...
| OptimusPrimesWife1 chapter 21 . 1/22
Please for the love of the gods continue this story! It's so fucking good! Honestly, the best I've ever read! MORE PLEASE!
| warrioroftheravens chapter 21 . 12/29/2016
I love this! It feels like I am reading a completely original work. The story line is great; the plot twists keep me on the edge of my seet. I love how you have incorpreted real history into the story. I remember learning about Amun. I will eagerly await the next chapter.
| Guest chapter 21 . 11/19/2016
This was soooo good! Keep it up, its amazing!