|Reviews for The Joke's On Us|
| RoseLight chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
Your opening lines are always intriguing, drawing readers onward, inward, into your adventurous imagination. Your prose is simple, clear and clever. We all try to come up with new descriptions for IK's eyes, and here you have succeeded perfectly: "neon." Of course! And such a melancholy insight: "He(IK) never needs anything" (Oh, break my heart)And then Solo's sweet reassurance to the universe :" ..because my partner is safe with me." Pure, simple, uncluttered declaration of true friendship. Thanks for another thoughtful read.
| PACTNMMT chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
I like this very much! He does indeed have a sense of humor...lol.
I enjoy stories that explore the closeness of their relationship without going over the slash threshold. I think you have succeeded nicely here!
| Cruelest Sea chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Nicely done and clever story..loved it.:)
| Avery1 chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
What a terrific story! Tightly written, and the appearance of the little boy is a masterful stroke. Thanks so much for writing it.