Reviews for Brothers
Jimelda chapter 1 . 6/30
oh my gosh; these two will be the death of me. they're so precious
LBH-don't give up chapter 1 . 5/23
So sweat. And it perfectly shows their bond. Beautiful story.
Dragon made of Fullmetal chapter 1 . 3/1
God... this was just so sweet!
At the "Al's soul smiled" a smile of my own appeared in my face, and didn't fade until the end.

Thanks a lot! This was a precious reading.
And I plenty agree with the "Kindness in a can" part. Thanks, for real. :')
VampireFrootloopsRule chapter 1 . 1/10/2013
So adorable! Loved it, a lot!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
so cute... I love a good brotherly Ed & Al fic... I've even wrote a couple myself... Though I don't have an account ( yet)
lambtastic chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
:3 So cute! I've always loved their bond! Great job on this. I love all it's fluffy contents:)
Kenshin's Soul chapter 1 . 3/29/2012
:)
PPVV chapter 1 . 3/28/2012
Argh. I'm just chewing through your work. Would you call this creeping? LOL!

In any case, I love this piece. It really makes me want to watch FMA again. There's a newer version out, apparently, one that sticks closer to the manga.

Ed's so sweet. I never thought of his reaction to his brother in that armor too much. I mean...they're brothers! How could he not love him? But at the same time, it must be so painful to see him like that. He must always blame himself every time he sees that body of armor.

I love older brothers. They are so great. But don't tell mine that because his head will get bigger than it already is ;P

Great way to show us Al's thoughts. You just wanna squish him...well...you know what I mean...

Thanks for writing,

-P.P.V.V.
caseyedith chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
Loved this! You captured the Elric brothers' personalities very well here! I never considered this side of things, but it is definitely very like Ed to do something like this. And "kindness in a can" had me cracking up!

Really nice story, I greatly enjoyed the easy-story telling vibe and the brothers' personalities coming through. :)
FifthDayOfMay chapter 1 . 12/26/2010
Awww Theyre so cute. It really is just like Ed to forgo his own comfort and safety to make Al feel better. Awesome story. It made me smile.
Crush-Chan17 chapter 1 . 12/9/2010
Awwww, this was absolutely adorable- and so in character. I loved it from beginning to end.
Kristen Sharpe chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Aww, this was such a sweet little snapshot of the brothers. You've captured them both perfectly. I especially loved Al's thoughts on how Ed treated him just like anyone else. Very sweet.
Jordanna Morgan chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
I love this so much. It captures both of the brothers so beautifully. 3
Janieshi chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Awww. I love a good brotherly love fic. Super cute! I hope to see more from you; please keep up the good work!
oakleaf chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
You've really captured their relationship in a beautiful light. Well done on a great (first?) story, and I really look forward to your future stories!
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