|Reviews for Five hosts, One hostess|
| ariel chapter 2 . 12/2/2013
i nearly cried if i wasent at school. lol
| Blacky6464 chapter 3 . 4/2/2013
Need more dtail but otherwise good
| akemi chapter 3 . 9/15/2012
Another review from me. Well, let me tell you first that it was a nice plot, being an AU and such, but I think I've gotta say my opinion about the whole fic(for future reference. :)). First of all, it's rushed. You did everything so fast. Lot of things occur in your story but it seems like it just happened in a blink of an eye. Secondly, how you write it, I mean the way you cut it in the middle of the story, such as adding another(new) scene/act without a warn or something of that sort makes it kinda confusing. I mean, I wasn't sure if the lines that I'm currently reading are still part of the recent scene or it's a new one. Lastly, it lacks something. Something like feelings? it's like the characters weren't expressing their feelings properly, coz I didn't feel their emotions that much. Oh, one more thing, please indicate the name of the speaker, coz sometimes, it's hard to tell which is which. :) anyway, don't take it to heart. We're just simply giving these pointers coz you have a good potential :D
| akemi chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
Pretty good, but kinda fast.
And I just notice, in this story, you mention that Tono and Haruhi were both on their first year, but why was Haru-chan addressing Tama-chan as senpai?
| friendwriter chapter 3 . 7/20/2012
Awesome! Loved it! ;D Please continue to write more? I look forward to the sequel :D
| TamoraSky chapter 3 . 8/21/2011
cute. I hope you make a sequel sooon!
| Envious Alchemist chapter 3 . 12/29/2010
Oh My Goddess! O-O This is AMAZING! absolutely LOVE this! *hands a cookie*
| Sweet Lunatick chapter 3 . 12/11/2010
AWWW, cute! _
I agree, the series WAS short.
| Galaxylam84 chapter 3 . 12/7/2010
Nice ending... all the cuteness dissapear and pure drama showed! lol! please continue with the story, the Grandma will definetely be against it... good story though
| Galaxylam84 chapter 1 . 12/7/2010
Cute, I like how is so similar to the original story but at the same time, so opposite, like the dad liking Tamaki or Haru-chan liking Tamaki right away, the story is really entertaining and fresh. ;)
| LOVESTRUCK27 chapter 3 . 11/27/2010
I really liked hope to read a new story soon