Reviews for Sin |
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![]() ![]() ![]() WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lives in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that the best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong, and she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that read this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on the site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake, apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A fine story. Well written, well thought-out, well done. This is the sort of fanfic that makes the site worth visiting. Please write more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why haven't you continue this!? |
![]() ![]() Please continue. This story has a potential for greatness. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is ... brilliant, i DEMAND MORE PETTY HUMAN, THE PRIME EVILS WILL HAVE YOUR BLOOD SHOULD YOU FAIL IN THIS. ...umm, yeah daemonic split personalities aside, this is awesome, it has the epicness of any good W40K fic combined with the nostalgia induced on anyone who has whittled away hours on Diablo 2 all in a well written bundle please we wish for ... MORE |
![]() ![]() Please update this story soon; along with your others, this one seems very promising! |
![]() ![]() Please update this story soon; along with your others, this one seems very promising! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting including the relictors I know only that their chapter was framed by a radical of the Ordo Maelleus and declared traitors. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah. Diablo. Good times. And a good story too boot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Most interesting. Can't wait to see where you take this from here. Great work. Keep at it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter i love the Relictors, i am glad to see them get some well deserved lovin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Relictors were declared Excommunicate Traitoris for gathering daemon weapons to fight chaos. Most factions within the imperium would consider them traitors. Interesting story please continue |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! i was hopeing you would do something like this please tell me that the marines will go up against the demon cows from diablo 2 update soon please |
![]() ![]() ![]() In the Emperor's name! You really like putting Space Marines in weird spots, you do it well though. I'll look forward to see what kind of chaos five Grey Knights can cause in the world of Diablo. Oh yeah, a small side note: the silvery color of the Grey Knights' armor is because it's unpainted, ceramite is naturally silver in color so all they do is polish it up some. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting! Looking forward to more! |