Reviews for His Father's Keeper
MioneWriter007 chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
That was pretty Great! you should totally write another chapter!
PigfartsPigfartsHereICome chapter 1 . 11/18/2010
It went way too fast. Also, the grammar was absolutely awful, and made the story kind of painful to read.
bigmommak chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Overall, a very nice story. It is entertaining to read, and believable. That is, except for the ending. You made a point to inform us how much pain she was in, how many cutes she had, and that magical healing of a muggle wound is like stitches. If all of that is true, how on earth did she feel well enough for sex? How on earth would Draco do any of that while she is injured? Yes, stay in the bed and snuggle. Yes, admit feelings and kiss. Yes, Draco takes care of Hermione. But, give the poor girl a couple of days to physically heal before going that far.